an awesome story please update soon
I hope you finish this one day I guess I better favorite this lol
excellent story with a great plot. Thoroughly enjoying reading it. Please please update soon thanks
Brill, i love it, really really hope that you continue the story! DUmbles-Minerva relationship, Harry-Snape: both as children and Adults, God i can't wait to see how you write their reunion as adults, thats got to be jaw-droppingly awkward!!! Please with a chocolate frog on top can you udpate soon.
Cecilia :)))
i read this right through, this is so great, made me laugh and made me cry, very well written, espescially the bit about sweets being bad for albuses teeth, i was in laughter for quite a while after that, so carry on writing this fabulous fic
wow, absolutely brillian story. there's no question about it going on my favourites. looking forward for updates.
I love this story! I hope to see more soon!
| Title: Playing on his fear
| 01 Nov 2007 8:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Wonderful story but Albus must have a case of split personalities. You say he isn't like Salazar Snape but he WATCHED what the Dursleys' did to Harry all throughout his life and DID NOTHING! Now suddenly he is kind and caring and sorrowful. It seems to me it is just another manipulation on Albus' part to get his tools in the right frame of mind to continue their jobs. Why now after 15 years with the Dursleys' is he concerned for Harry, or 20 years for Sev? If he didn't know what was happening in Harry's or Sev's life until later I could see this story as more plausible. One other thing, Harry is living in an enchanted MAGICAL castle for weeks, how is it no one had mentioned the word Magic to explain anything the two boys had seen? Harry and Sev are absolutely adorable, and two toddlers running the adults ragged is perfect. Loved Little Healer Harry and hope you have more interaction with just the two boys.
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