wow, absolutely brillian story. there's no question about it going on my favourites. looking forward for updates.
I love this story! I hope to see more soon!
| Title: Playing on his fear
| 01 Nov 2007 8:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Wonderful story but Albus must have a case of split personalities. You say he isn't like Salazar Snape but he WATCHED what the Dursleys' did to Harry all throughout his life and DID NOTHING! Now suddenly he is kind and caring and sorrowful. It seems to me it is just another manipulation on Albus' part to get his tools in the right frame of mind to continue their jobs. Why now after 15 years with the Dursleys' is he concerned for Harry, or 20 years for Sev? If he didn't know what was happening in Harry's or Sev's life until later I could see this story as more plausible. One other thing, Harry is living in an enchanted MAGICAL castle for weeks, how is it no one had mentioned the word Magic to explain anything the two boys had seen? Harry and Sev are absolutely adorable, and two toddlers running the adults ragged is perfect. Loved Little Healer Harry and hope you have more interaction with just the two boys.
I found your story 2 days ago and read all 26 chapters in 1 day. I love your story! How much longer do they have to be kids? oooo...i wonder what they will do when they remember all that happened. ^^
update sooon please.
| Title: Playing on his fear
| 18 Aug 2007 6:32 am
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| Reviewer: AllyKat (Anonymous)
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I thought he was James Barnes in the prior chapter, not Jeffrey?
I cannot even express to you how happy I am that you updated this! :)
I think that explains a lot about why Severus is the way he is as an adult.
| Title: Playing on his fear
| 11 Aug 2007 10:26 pm
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| Reviewer: jEN77 (Anonymous)
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WOW! LOVELY STORY. PLEASE POST MORE SOON. i AM SURPRISED THAT THERE IS NO SIBLING RIVALRY GOING ON. tHEY ONLY HAVE A FEW MORE WEEKS TO BE LITTLE RIGHT?
This is a wonderful story! I really love child fics. Please update soon!
| Title: Playing on his fear
| 11 Aug 2007 11:18 am
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| Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous)
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Hooray for angst! rofl I discovered your fic today and I totally love it! I cant wait to read your next update XD
yeah you updated. Thanks so much for that, this was a really great chapter. I'm glad that Severus has worked through what happened with his "parents" and is going to be able to move on and growing up in a loving family with Albus, Minerva and Harry. Keep up the great work and please update again soon. LES
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