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Reviews For Never Too Late
Title: As The 7th Month Dies 26 Jun 2005 7:02 am
Reviewer: Mariposa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! This is an amazing fic! I seem to be saying that alot here at P&S :oD To start I thought in the beginning it was going to be pretty fluffy but its not all fluff and I think you've struck a good balance. I love the little boys and I just want to smother them! They are too cute! I love how caring everyone is and calling them pet names, too sweet! The parts where the boys are having problems are so heart wrenching! DD should be glad they both don't seem to have problems at the same time ;o) I like the explaination you gave about why this age and what is happening to them. I can't wait to see how it turns out after they re-age. I hope they don't have to stop early. Remus and Harry are just too sweet together, I love it, and the little Moony he gave him, i could see Harry clinging to that all the time. I wonder what he'll do with it after he takes the antidote. I absolutely loved this last chapter. Thank goodness the twins weren't there in the boys fragile state. I'm sure Molly thought of that. I loved seeing Ron, Hermione and Ginny interacting with them, I wish it could have been more. I can't wait for more! I want to see thier hurts heal so badly! Great story! Great Job! And last but not least a Great Job! to your beta! This story is absolutely brilliant!
Title: Good Advice 10 May 2005 2:21 am
Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. *shakes head* *sigh* Damn Dursleys... Great chap though! I pity Dumbledore, honestly, a clingy toddler is a nightmare! Next chap!!!
Title: A Troubling Return 03 Mar 2005 10:14 pm
Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Signed) [Report This]
    lol! Awww! That was cute! Poor Harry. *sigh* *grin* These two are soooo cute!!! lol, you almost forget that they're really a 37 year old man and a 16 year old teenage boy! Great chap(s)! NEXT!!!
Title: Not Padfoot 23 Feb 2005 6:48 pm
Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww... Poor Harry. *shakes head* And poor Sev. I always thought something like that had happened to him. *sigh* Poor boys, and poor Albus. Things just got a lot harder. *grin* great chap! NEXT!
Title: Complications and Slides 20 Feb 2005 2:22 am
Reviewer: Gray Darken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awwww.... how cute! Will you update soon?? I would very much love if you did, because this is simply wonderful. ^o^ Thank you for posting the story!
Title: Complications and Slides 18 Feb 2005 1:38 am
Reviewer: Mikee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a delightful story. I really like how you've characterized everyone. I especially like how you are treating Severus and Harry. . I am impressed that you have given each child his own set of challenges (taking into account the fact that their backgrounds are not too dissimilar in that both were abusive). It would be all too easy to have each boy act the same. . I don't like that Severus is a bully, but I understand his actions, and they make sence (as do Harry's passive actions). I like that you balance his aggressive action by having him be insecure about his bullying action, and then adding the comforting action of Sev patting Harry on the head shows that Sev is struggling with what he was taught at the hands of his father against what he leaned from Albus. I am quite looking forward to seeing the benefits to Severus of his time as a toddler once summer is over. Will this affect how he perceives Harry (and other students) when he is re-aged.? . I really like how Harry needs constant reinforcement that he has value and worth. Well done, and so realistic. Since he is so much younger than Severus (pre de-aging potion), he still carries, quite obviously, his insecurities. He hasn't really leaned to mask them - at least not well. I am looking forward to seeing how being de-aged will benifit Harry at the end of summer. . Do you ever e-mail update notifications.? If so, may I ask to be included.? I'd hate to miss any of this story. . You can e-mail me at: Scooter7232@c... . Thank you for a wonderful story. .

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Title: Complications and Slides 11 Feb 2005 8:38 pm
Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Signed) [Report This]
    lol! That was cute! Poor boys. *shakes head* First one, then the other. *sigh* *snicker* I can't wait to see Minerva at the park. lol! That ought to be interesting. *grin* great chaps! NEXT!
Title: Insights and Nightmares 09 Feb 2005 11:30 pm
Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Poor things. *shakes head* Excelent chap. I pity Dumbles right about now. He's got two toddlers viaing for his attention. One neglected, the other physically abused. *sigh* Great chap! NEXT!
Title: When Harry Met Severus 03 Feb 2005 1:50 pm
Reviewer: ,00, (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent story. Love the little ones. Small Snape yah. Story finished at FFN.
Title: When Harry Met Severus 02 Feb 2005 2:42 am
Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Signed) [Report This]
    lol! This is sooo cute! *grin* Poor Dumbledore. He really doesn't know what he got himself into does he? *smirk* I know from experience ONE two year old is enough, but TWO is hell in nappys. *grin* Excelent fic so far! Next chap!

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