Great battle! Though Dumbledore and Grindelwald are still on the loose. Too bad the story hasn't been updated for so long. It's a different direction from most time travel fics.
Tommy really messed up. Hopefully, he learned something from his experience. Too bad the unspeakables didn't check Tommy's things when he came home. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Your Dumbledore certainly is a manipulative blanketey-blank. He has no idea of the bond between Harry and Tommy so that will probably blow up in his face, too. I like the way the unspeakables showed up in force to straighten things out. They will be keeping an eye on Hogwarts after that incident so Albus will have to lay low.
Deaging Harry seems like a good idea. He will be able to grow up as a big brother to Tom without the problems he had in his past life. Now if Severus will just follow through and do what Harry wanted, things should really change.
That was a surprising first chapter. I like the way you turned canon on its head and changed everything. Poor Harry. Nothing was the way he thought it was. Looking forward to more.
yes they defeated morfin!!!! now all they need to do is defeat dumbledork and his lover. cant wait for the next chapter. :)
I hope you write more of this wonderful story in the future. I'd love to see what happens next!
Absolutely wicked! Especially loved
the way that Harry learns the real
truth about his friends but also the
way that nefarious plans of Al & Gill
are revealed!
That finally Harry gets to show that
he's much more than just a brave
Gryffindor...that he has elements of all houses within him. But just what will Harry do about his betrayers...because in the past they won't have betrayed him yet?
Its amazing that know matter what changes Severus has made in the past, somethings just seem to have to happen. Though I do wonder just how many witches, wizards and non-magicals have been born or saved that never had a change in the previous version of time.
Dumbledore really is insidious in how he moves, plots and manipulates all of those innocent, naive children at Hogwarts, like he tried with Damien, Daniel and later with Tommy. How many others has he manipulated, forced into playing along with his twisted views. Honestly, Hogwarts would be much better of without the likes of Albus too-many-names Dumbledore, how on earth he can have been sorted into Gryffindor as a student, I seriously doubt! Hmm, if Salazar Slytherin has/had a portrait of himself at Hogwarts, but what about the other 3 founders...and if Salazar, supposedly left Hogwarts, because of his disagreement with the other 3 then why would his portrait have remained at Hogwarts, in the Slytherin common room, hmm?
I can hardly wait to find out just what both Severus, and Salazar will have to say to there errant little heir Tommy, but call me Tom? Absolutely loved the battle with the intruders into Willow Castle, how the snakes battled, and the untimely arrival of Severus, John (and Salazar) upon the basilisk from Hogwarts....totally wicked!!
Its amazing that know matter what changes Severus has made in the past, somethings just seem to have to happen. Though I do wonder just how many witches, wizards and non-magicals have been born or saved that never had a change in the previous version of time.
Dumbledore really is insidious in how he moves, plots and manipulates all of those innocent, naive children at Hogwarts, like he tried with Damien, Daniel and later with Tommy. How many others has he manipulated, forced into playing along with his twisted views. Honestly, Hogwarts would be much better of without the likes of Albus too-many-names Dumbledore, how on earth he can have been sorted into Gryffindor as a student, I seriously doubt! Hmm, if Salazar Slytherin has/had a portrait of himself at Hogwarts, but what about the other 3 founders...and if Salazar, supposedly left Hogwarts, because of his disagreement with the other 3 then why would his portrait have remained at Hogwarts, in the Slytherin common room, hmm?
I can hardly wait to find out just what both Severus, and Salazar will have to say to there errant little heir Tommy, but call me Tom? Absolutely loved the battle with the intruders into Willow Castle, how the snakes battled, and the untimely arrival of Severus, John (and Salazar) upon the basilisk from Hogwarts....totally wicked!!
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