I've really enjoyed this series thus far. After so long, I figure you won't be completing this story, but I would be excited if you did. This story leaves me wanting to know more!
I love it!
Please, please continue writing!
Has this story been abandoned? You haven't updated in over a year. I should've checked before starting reading the first story, i guess... :(
I've spent the last week or so thoroughly enjoying your stories. You are an incredibly talented writer and I can hardly wait to see what you post next! This story in particular is so unique and well thought out in several areas that I've not come across before. I would enjoy helping you as a beta if you have need of that, though I haven't noticed any mistakes, so it's likely you already have a great one or are doing just fine on you own.
Things I've loved: the set up of things to come with Malfoy (who I hope is secretly good), and Umbridge ( who has really stepped in it now, and that Harry gave her just enough rope to hang herself).
The new and varied friendships in different houses, and with Blaise.
That for once, Dumbledore is clearly outranked by Tobias/Harry's new guardians.
And of course, the new connection with Severus that hasnt quite developed into what it could yet become.
Things I'm wondering: why MO's mom sought and chose Harry, how Severus is related to the Unseele Sidhe, how Harry can possibly manage the workload he has, when his protectors will notice his hand(or will it be fully healed by the time they have a chance to notice), if the students of Hogwarts will have a chance to train in Defense and how that might come about, and how Harry will manage to work with all the people at his beck and call, without insulting them in some unintended way, and how his next meeting with Malloy Sr goes.
Best wishes!
Kim
I'm so glad you are continuing this story. It's been on my mental watch list as I was very impressed with outcast's alley. This story is awesome.
Love it! Absolutely fantastic! I love how Tobias has so many people looking out for him.
I was so excited to see an update! This is one of my favorite stories and I've been dying to read more. You delivered a fantastic chapter, you even managed to describe all the colors of the Fae without boring us. Well done!
Oh, he'll figure out sooner or later that the servants are there to make his life easier (or at least smoother), not more complicated than it already is. Though, Potions class is going to be... tense.
The answer to your question "Do you like it?" Is an unqualified Yes. I thought this story and the previous in the series were unique and a very different take on Harry Potter FanFiction. I love little Mo. Harry's love for his daughter is now his driving force in everything he does.
I want Harry (Tobias) to keep his independent spirit but he needs to let the Queen and her Consort help he adjust to his new life at least a little bit.
There is so much left to find out in this story. I'm glad you decided to come back and continue the series.
So glad that you are writing more for this story!! Its a favorite of mine and I am excited to see what happens next!
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