I'm glad you made the ending ambiguous, because my soul couldn't handle them dying together in that cell.
A deeply sad and touching story with a shining ray of hope that broke through the gloom at the end.
Title: Lost Boys
| 21 May 2016 8:40 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Sad little story but very well done thank you
*sniff* Very angsty, and very hopeful--good story :)
Very touching. It was perfectly angsty, with a glimmer of hope at the end. I would describe this story as a dark maroon, with droplets falling from the parchment that it was written on and becoming steadily darker as they fall and just before they hit the ground they become black, but at the very end of the story there is a flare of white. Amazing job with this.
This is a story I can read again and again and never be tired of.... Honestly I wish there was a sequel
Title: Lost Boys
| 13 Sep 2014 7:48 pm
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Reviewer: anna (Anonymous)
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Title: Lost Boys
| 03 Dec 2013 10:50 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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