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Reviews For An Unexpected Boggart
Was bittersweet..and I love the emotions..it really grabbed me..if that makes sense :)
Was bittersweet..and I love the emotions..it really grabbed me..if that makes sense :)
Found this via the challenges. Like what you've done with it! Harry's confusion was great. Especially the 'getting blacker' parts. Think Snape was a bit too OOC at the end there though, I think he would have been more reserved. I would have loved it if you'd made it a bit longer with a bit more dialogue in between when Harry wakes up and the end to see Snape change better. Great story!! :)
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