Title: Blank Spaces On His Family Tree
| 10 Sep 2012 9:38 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter but I'm confused about who Severus obliviated was it a muggle or Judith?
Author's Response: Thanks. And Severus obliviated Judith.
I enjoyed reading it!
Author's Response: Glad to hear it! Thanks.
Even if Severus didn't, I enjoyed the sleepover. Having Jack tell Severus about the family tree was a nice touch. One comment though, when the boys hugged Severus, you wrote he stood ridged. I believe you meant rigid.
Author's Response: Yeah, Sev wasn't so pleased, but I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the typo, I'll go fix that now. And thank you for your review! :)
Title: Blank Spaces On His Family Tree
| 20 Aug 2012 4:36 pm
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Love this story! Here's hoping you post more soon.
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that! I have another update in the works, so I'll be posting another chapter in a few days. Thanks for the review.
Lovely to see an update! Jack is such an awesome friend to Harry, so sweet that they got to do something so normal as having a sleepover :)
Author's Response: I'm glad. I have another update on the way, should be up in a few days. I agree with your comments, and thank you for the review.
Title: Blank Spaces On His Family Tree
| 19 Aug 2012 4:23 pm
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Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
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Oh Severus is going to have to have a talk with Harry/Cody. I really hope Severus finds a way to keep him perminately, even if he has to blood adopt him.
Author's Response: I think you'll enjoy next chapter, though blood adoption won't be necessary. Thanks for the review.
Loved it! What a wonderful addition to your story. Thanks for the update. V.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it, and thank you for reviewing!
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