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Title: Changes 21 Apr 2013 10:54 pm
Reviewer: bored-as-fuzz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    was harry's bedroom in chapter 12 your bedroom?
Title: Changes 10 Sep 2012 10:17 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the room! Thank you for a great chapter

    Author's Response: Glad to hear it. Thanks for the review.
Title: Changes 28 Aug 2012 5:59 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    The room is perfect! Harry deserves that and so much more!

    This was such a lovely chapter. I really enjoyed reading this, especially the interactions between Severus and Erin. I'm sure they could turn out to be great friends, maybe even as close as brother/ sister. Harry's gotten really lucky so far! I really can't wait for more. I'm especially looking forward to seeing more family time, Sev/Harry/Erin interactions.

    Thanks for the quick update and hope to read more soon!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like Harry's room, and yes he does deserve it. I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the chapter, and it is my intention for Severus and Erin to be more brother/sister than anything. They will reach that point of closeness, but not quite yet. More family time should be ahead as well, and I will be updating again when I can. I am already up to chapter 20, so the wait won't be too long. Thank you very much for your review! :)
Title: Changes 27 Aug 2012 1:52 am
Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww I love Erin, she's such an adorable mum :) Oooh good idea for Harry to keep Erins surname instead, he might get bullied at Hogwarts otherwise haha! It'll definitely be interesting to see what it's like for Harry at Hogwarts, with Snape as a dad! Great update!

    Author's Response: Yeah, I'm become fond of Erin too. Haha, yeah exactly - Severus knows it too. Giving Harry his surname would not be a good idea for the kid's future at Hogwarts and beyond. Life at Hogwarts for Harry is going to be very different from the books. I've got my own plots arranged, and things will be quite interesting from the very beginning. Thanks, and thank you for your review!
Title: Changes 26 Aug 2012 11:04 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh what a horrible woman Judith is! I cant wait to hear her reasons for doing that to her own daughter :)

    Author's Response: Indeed she is, and it's not even the worst Judith has done in her life. The reasons are cloudy at the moment, and it be some time before they are thoroughly explored and understood. Thank you for your review.
Title: Changes 26 Aug 2012 8:36 am
Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed) [Report This]
    I think this is great. I can't wait to see how this all turns out. I love it. I feel bad for Jack who's going to be left when Harry starts school. I hope they keep in touch.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm pleased you think so. I am actually writing more now, though a much later chapter. When Harry get his Hogwarts letter, it will indeed be a sad time for the two boys, though I feel content with how I wrote it so hopefully my readers will agree. Thank you for your review.
Title: Changes 26 Aug 2012 4:47 am
Reviewer: JulieSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooo...I really like his room!

    And this is an awesome story! I'm glad they were able to find a workable solution for Harry's sake. :D Hehehe...Do I sense possible romantic interest between the two in the future? I know it would probably take a while for it to develop, given Sev's strong love for Lily and distrust of people in general, and at least some distrust of Erin in particular (which, if I understood correctly, was because of her fondness of Sirius).

    And I really like Jack, too! I'm so glad that Harry has a friend he can rely on. I have to admit, though, I was really wary of him at first, but I'm glad he's turned out to be trustworthy! It'll be interesting to see how you resolve the whole separation thing when Harry goes to Hogwarts.

    Hehehe...I really like, too, that Sev obliviated Erin's mom. She deserved it after trying to harm Harry!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you like his room, I wasn't sure for a while what it would look like and was lucky to find a picture almost identical to what I had in mind.

    Thanks, I'm happy you think so. I do not think Erin and Severus will ever be romantically involved, though I have no ironed out the details there yet. Severus loves Lily, and Erin loves Sirius, so there's still a lot of deep emotions going on for them, directed at someone else. We shall see. And Severus distrusts people in general, but yes anyone who likes Sirius Black he feels should be watched closely lol.

    Jack is a character I too wasn't sure about at first, but he turned out to serve a lot of purposes at this stage of the story and I do enjoy writing him. When the time of separation comes and Harry has to go to Hogwarts, I think you will indeed be interested in how I have told that part of the story. Haha, I had to have Severus do something to Erin's mother, and personally I think it's less than what she deserved (she's done more harmful things than just this), but I knew something had to be done.

     Thank you SO very much for your review!! :D 

Title: Changes 25 Aug 2012 11:05 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww. great chapter. Nice room. :D

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Title: Changes 25 Aug 2012 7:27 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I was glad that Erin let Severus legilmise her to find out what happened to her powers. The two of them working on restoring her memories and her witchcraft will create a bond between them in addition to the one they already have being Harry's parents. I hope some of her experiences with that will come up in future chapters.

    Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, it will create a bond with them doing that, in addition to raising Harry. Where that bond lead, however, I am not yet certain. I think I will show some of her exeriences with that and her past will be shown later on in the story. Thanks for your review.

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