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Title: Hogwarts Acceptance Letter 09 Oct 2013 4:04 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved the outcome for jack well written!
Title: Hogwarts Acceptance Letter 11 Mar 2013 2:34 pm
Reviewer: Rowena BaronErikandSnapeLover (Signed) [Report This]
    I knew it! I knew he was magical from how he got so sick from the potion. I mean, just being near a case of accidental magic, even one was big as turning a book to a frog wouldn't get you that sick. So yay, on to Hogwarts!
Title: Hogwarts Acceptance Letter 11 Sep 2012 12:00 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely surprise I wondered why Jack was Ill and then no ,ore mention elf any magic thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks. The poison still would have made Jack ill, because he had been recently exposed to magic, but being magicl himself only made it worse. Some of his magic was also disguised as Harry's, which was why many didn't notice it was actually Jack's. Thanks for the review.
Title: Hogwarts Acceptance Letter 10 Sep 2012 9:20 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    :-D I was getting my suspicions about Jack, but didn't want to say anything in my reviews in case I was wrong. I really like this chapter a lot--although I still want to strangle Jack's parents!

    I really liked how Severus explained about why Harry's hiding the letter had caused upset. And I liked it when he hugged Harry and forgave him.

    Of course Harry would be over the moon, hearing the good news that Jack would accompany him to Hogwarts! :-D The two of them are going to be quite a pair, and I'm sure they're going to cause a lot of mischief along the way!

    Well done!

    Author's Response: I'm not a big fan of Jack's parents either. And yes, the boys will be getting into quite a lot of mischief at Hogwarts. Thanks you very much for your review, I enjoyed reading your comments and hearing what you thought.
Title: Hogwarts Acceptance Letter 09 Sep 2012 8:10 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter, although with only magical kids getting sick from that poison, the idea that Jack would be left behind was a bit incongruous, imho.

    Author's Response: Thanks. And actually, not only magical children could get sick from the poison. Any child, even if they're purely muggles, could have gotten sick if they were recently exposed to magic. Jack had been exposed to Harry's magic just before he'd had the poison, and being magical himself only made the sickness worse. Thanks for the review.
Title: Hogwarts Acceptance Letter 08 Sep 2012 6:35 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Sneaky watercrystals! I'm glad that Jack is going to be able to stay with Severus, Harry and Erin until he goes to Hogwarts and, perhaps, beyond. His family didn't put up much resistance to Jack's leaving. I wonder if they had some notion that Jack was different but were more passive about their unease.

    Author's Response: Thanks :P. Jack's family didn't put up as much resistance mostly because their mind was only occupied with Jack's brother Michael. They would have had some suspicion of Jack being different, but in the last number of years they weren't paying as much attention, but yes your comments are on the right track too. Thanks for the review.
Title: Hogwarts Acceptance Letter 07 Sep 2012 11:25 pm
Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhhh no way!! :D I don't remember any hints of magic in Jack from before but I guess I really just didn't expect it!! That was an amazing chapter!

    Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you were surprised. Most of Jack's magic was disguised as Harry's. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thank for your review.
Title: Hogwarts Acceptance Letter 07 Sep 2012 9:41 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Argh, I didn't get notifications that this updated! Again! Maybe you should get it checked out with an admin. Lol, anyways this was a wonderful surprise!

    And I especially loved that last scene where Harry reverts to this past apellation for his father. It was really sweet to see such a bonding moment between father and son. Plus, the fact that he would have spilled all to Severud had he asked says a lot about how highly Harry thinks of him. Please update again soon, I'm really looking forward to reading more!

    Author's Response:

    I wasn't aware that the notifications weren't working, maybe I should get it checked out. Thanks for letting me know.

    Haha, I'm glad you liked it. I think that will keep happening from time to time. And yes, your comments are very accurate. I will be updating again in a day or so, I'm glad you're looking forward to more. Thank you for your review! 

Title: Hogwarts Acceptance Letter 07 Sep 2012 8:53 pm
Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed) [Report This]
    How cute! I loved how this turned out and I can't wait for the shopping trip. That's sure to be amusing for the boys. I loved this.

    Author's Response: Thanks. And yes when they go shopping it will be quite interesting. I'm glad you think so, and thanks for the review.
Title: Hogwarts Acceptance Letter 07 Sep 2012 3:01 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't wait! Hogwarts, here we come!

    Author's Response: Glad to hear it. Thanks for the review.

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