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Title: Ready or Not 17 Sep 2012 10:28 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very powerful chapter thank you so much.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Title: Ready or Not 15 Sep 2012 8:35 am
Reviewer: xVortex of MemoriesX (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Update as soon as you possibly can please?

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad. I generally try to update every couple of days. 
Title: Ready or Not 14 Sep 2012 10:41 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness! Poor Harry, he must feel quite horrible if he's wishing he was alone again! This chapter started on such a light note.

    I really enjoyed the apothecary scene…it was so sweet and the whole shampoo and soap thing was hilarious! It was so sweet to see Harry become all protective over his father. :)

    On another note, I did find the image of Snape in the middle of the room looking heavenward as Harry clung to him rather funny, as if asking "why me?" I'm not quite sure but it adds a slight comic moment to the otherwise a angsty scene.

    I really can't wait for more! This is sure to have a change in Harry's and Jack's friendship that up 'til now was running fairly smoothly. Please please update again soon, I look forward to reading everyone's reactions to this new revelation. :)

    Author's Response: Yeah, porr Harry. I enjoyed reading your comments of the things you liked and found amusing, especially in regards to the "why me?" moment you mentioned. I thought that too! And yeah, the boys are very close, but every freidnship has a moment where things are rocky, and this was theirs. Thank you very much for your review!!
Title: Ready or Not 14 Sep 2012 6:25 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the scene where the boys got their wands. Something about the wood types and core materials fascinates me and I always enjoy what the characters end up with. The shopping for personal hygiene items by Erin was fun. Severus may defend the boys from danger with his life but that doesn't prevent him from throwing them both under the bus when it comes to Erin and hair products. I wondered when Harry's jealousy would get the better of him and don't envy his parents' in having to punish him and make him feel wanted at the same time.

    Author's Response: You did? I'm glad to hear that. I made sure to work out the wand properly and so they each fit the boys. I'm really glad you enjoyed reading that. Haha, yeah I liked the hygiene stuff. It's actually because of my beta Ash that there was so much of it, and I'm glad because it was rather fun to write. And exactly! There are just some things Sev won't save the boys from, and Erin with hair products is one of them. Harry's jealous was bound to become too much for him, but you're right it's a tricky situation on his parent's side as they have to punish and reassure. I like how it turned out though, so hopefully you will too. Thanks for the review!
Title: Ready or Not 14 Sep 2012 1:08 am
Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Hah oh dear, that was a bit awkward! I feel really really sorry for Jack though, the poor thing! His own parents don't really seem to care about him that much, that he probably felt like he could have another shot at a family this way! Can't wait to see how Snape reacts to that whole episode! Great chapter :)

    Author's Response: Yeah, hehe. I feel sorry for Jack too, it's so sad to write his situation sometimes, and I reckon he does sort of see Harry's family as a chance to have a bit of that family life. Thanks for the review!

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