OOHH I LIKE!
This is really good! I felt really bad for Harry when he was thrown outside and all, but I love the button! It was so cute!
And yes, I like Jack. He's cool. I can't wait for all this stuff to come out about Harry Potter really being Cody! :))
Update soon please!
| Title: A Confusion of Names
| 09 Dec 2010 6:54 am
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Anonymous)
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I like Jack. It would be cool if he could go to Hogwarts too even if he didn't end up in the same house as Harry. That's what I'm hoping anyhow that Jack is magic too, also that Severus, Harry, and Erin will all end up together.
| Title: A Little Light and Friendship
| 09 Dec 2010 6:34 am
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Anonymous)
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I want Harry and Erin to be together, but I also want Snape and Harry to be together.... so... Snape and Erin and Harry?
| Title: A Confusion of Names
| 02 Dec 2010 3:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Gi7llian (Anonymous)
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I dont think Erin is needed in the story, in fact, I think the story would do nicely without her. She's a little irritating to be honest, but I really do love the suspense you kept us in, when is Snape gonna realise who Cody is?
| Title: Volumes
| 02 Dec 2010 7:34 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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You consistently confuse THEN with THAN. A beta would be able to help you with that and the other miscellaneous errors.
Thought you might like to know.
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