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Reviews For The Forgotten Child
So I got a viral infection two days ago and I was desperately hoping for an update in this story to make me feel better so cheers for that! :) And I have to say I loves the whole scene between Severus, Harry, and Erin. Once again, the connection between Harry and his father was portrayed a bit more significantly but you really explained why that is. Loved it! The whole Harry washing Severus's hair scene was entirely too sweet! I wonder if Harrt will use his newly found power to sneak his way out of trouble at Hogwarts, hehe. Can't wait to see which house the two boys get into! Please update again soon!
So I got a viral infection two days ago and I was desperately hoping for an update in this story to make me feel better so cheers for that! :) And I have to say I loves the whole scene between Severus, Harry, and Erin. Once again, the connection between Harry and his father was portrayed a bit more significantly but you really explained why that is. Loved it! The whole Harry washing Severus's hair scene was entirely too sweet! I wonder if Harrt will use his newly found power to sneak his way out of trouble at Hogwarts, hehe. Can't wait to see which house the two boys get into! Please update again soon! Author's Response: Yeah, it's all part of a plot so there will be more information released in due time. I'm glad the story made you feel better! Get well soon. Once again, I enjoyed your comments and shared thoughts. They're very motivating, interesting, and helpful. I love them, so thanks for the review!!
Author's Response: All shall be revealed in due time. They're important to the story, though. Thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad. And yeah, that's right. The last paragraphs are the beginning of another plot, so there will be more relating to it over the coming chapters; some more than others. Harry's house will be revealed soon enough. As for Severus' image...you'll have to wait and see ;) Also, just a note...Severus won't be a Potions Master. He's a tutor. More on that later. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad. I generally try to update every couple of days.
I really enjoyed the apothecary scene…it was so sweet and the whole shampoo and soap thing was hilarious! It was so sweet to see Harry become all protective over his father. :) On another note, I did find the image of Snape in the middle of the room looking heavenward as Harry clung to him rather funny, as if asking "why me?" I'm not quite sure but it adds a slight comic moment to the otherwise a angsty scene. I really can't wait for more! This is sure to have a change in Harry's and Jack's friendship that up 'til now was running fairly smoothly. Please please update again soon, I look forward to reading everyone's reactions to this new revelation. :) Author's Response: Yeah, porr Harry. I enjoyed reading your comments of the things you liked and found amusing, especially in regards to the "why me?" moment you mentioned. I thought that too! And yeah, the boys are very close, but every freidnship has a moment where things are rocky, and this was theirs. Thank you very much for your review!!
Author's Response: You did? I'm glad to hear that. I made sure to work out the wand properly and so they each fit the boys. I'm really glad you enjoyed reading that. Haha, yeah I liked the hygiene stuff. It's actually because of my beta Ash that there was so much of it, and I'm glad because it was rather fun to write. And exactly! There are just some things Sev won't save the boys from, and Erin with hair products is one of them. Harry's jealous was bound to become too much for him, but you're right it's a tricky situation on his parent's side as they have to punish and reassure. I like how it turned out though, so hopefully you will too. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Yeah, I agree with your comments, and that's exactly why it causes isses for Harry. I assure you, the boys will work it out at some point, they've been best friends for too long not to, and I think Jack and Harry are good kids so yeah. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Yeah, hehe. I feel sorry for Jack too, it's so sad to write his situation sometimes, and I reckon he does sort of see Harry's family as a chance to have a bit of that family life. Thanks for the review! |
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