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Reviews For Forget-Me-Not
I really really like it. Two specific thoughts: a) you capture the whatever of Harry not being able to eat really, really well (i.e, I can identify with it) and b) What on earth is mushroom pie?
I think the way you're writing this is perfect and so intriguing, there's no danger that anyone could stop reading half way through... personally I feel like I just have to find out all those strategically missing little gaps of information that keep the curiosity rolling from chapter to chapter. And Snape's history with Lily just became that much more interesting too, why did he change Harry's nappies - the cutest of mental images btw ^^ - and what is Malfoy playing at...I cant help thinking he cant be being too malicious when it comes to Harry but then I was foolish enough to think Charlie and Zabini might be nice too... I like how well you're balancing the cute, more-ish fluffy moments where everything works out with those other, less kind moments where people are just abusing Harry's trust... it makes it all feel very real and that is rare and only found in the best fics. Cant wait for more. "You are a very precious boy." - I swear my heart melted ^^ x
I hope we'll soon find out why Ron and Hermione seem to have forgotten about Harry. |
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