Title: Chapter 6: Secrets
| 07 May 2011 12:27 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter liked the scene with Severus
How much damage can Vodemort do huh? Famous last words. But that was a good chapter :)
How much damage indeed? Good chapter, albeit too short. But what's here is great!
Title: Chapter 6: Secrets
| 03 May 2011 6:06 pm
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Reviewer: Courtney (Anonymous)
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Such a good story! I can't wait to see what damage Voldemort does next!
Soooo good! Update quickly!
Title: Chapter 5: Equal Measures
| 21 Mar 2011 11:51 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great to catch up as I seemed to have missed a few chapters! Very tense good writing thank you
awesome chapter. update soon
Title: Chapter 4: Hero Complex
| 08 Mar 2011 11:13 am
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Reviewer: Espied7 (Anonymous)
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I hope you're planning to write more of this - I love it! Great work.
Author's Response: I am! This is the next fic on my list to finish--just as soon as I finish my taxes!
This story is so fantastic! I can't wait for more. I just love all your writing, you do a phenomenal job of staying true to Snape's real character--it's so hard to find writers that really do that.
Title: Chapter 4: Hero Complex
| 23 Feb 2011 6:39 pm
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Reviewer: Caecelia (Anonymous)
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This is wonderful. With the exception of a few minor grammatical mistakes, the story is nearly perfect. Snape, especially, is wonderfully in character, and I appreciate the way you tell us the story from his perspective, without pathos. I very much hope that this story will someday be continued.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'd more than welcome the corrections for the grammatical errors if you'd like to beta for me! Please let me know!
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