Title: Potions and Ponderings
| 19 Jan 2012 11:24 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Nice. Poor Harry having to write that essay. His friends must be frantic since he's disappeared. I wonder how long he will sleep. Great chapter and great story!
Love it! Yay! The part about the shed and the spiders was unique, it still fit but it's not an overly used cliche like the cupboard under the stairs again. Well done.
Fabulous chapter. i think it's just the perfect length. :)
Love. it. Poor Harry. What a mess he's in. :)
So have they have forgotten Harry on Christmas? And how will Severus attempt to give Harry some security in his life? And how far will this extend? More please!
beautuful i think if anyone can provide a foundation it would be snape
Loved it! Very sweet...Please update soon, I'm really looking forward to reading more!
I'd love to see a Christmas scene, where Snape takes Harry home and maybe gives him a photo album or tells him stories about this mum. I'd feel like that's something Snape would do. As for some conflict, maybe a misunderstanding? For instance, Harry overhears a conversation between Snape and someone else, belittling him or something along those lines. And then Harry stops coming to Snape...It's not much but I hope it helps a bit! I think some conflict between Ron and Harry seems inevitable, especially the way he's acting with Harry. I'm sure a fight between them will only solidify Harry and Snape's relationship.
Thank you for updating, even if the chapter was like pulling teeth :) Despite any difficulty you might have had writing it, the chapter was really good (although the conversation in Dumbledore's office was kinda awkward). Anyways, please update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, it was meant to be awkward in the office. Thanks for the review.
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