Awwww. I liked the chapter. So glad that Harry got that all off his chest. Nice job. Thanks for the update!
Oh my God! That was just so perfect...so beautiful.
I loved the angst and the depth of emotion that you've captured.
Poor Harry. He really 'doesn't' think that he deserves kindness from anyone at all, does he? I loved that Snape held his temper and handled Harry's insecurities so gently and compassionately.
Well done JA. I love this story, and can't wait for more. You've done Jan proud with her challenge.
Oh, this was SO good! Poor little Harry!
I love this story. It's really great to see Severus starting to care about Harry, holding him when he cries, cute :) Also good to see Severus seeing Harry in a new light, and trying to help him. Great job, update soon :D
I think its great! Can't wait for more :D
Very moving. It was quite effective that Snape was realizing it just as Harry was. Good chapter.
Great story! You're always so creative at coming up with new ones. I love how Severus is reaching out to Harry, even when Harry is trying to push him away. The poor kid is having such a hard time, and has suffered so much. He does have difficulty accepting kindness, wanting it but being confused and feeling unworthy of it at the same time. I'm glad that Severus was able to help him.
Looking forward to more!
Love the emotion in this chapter and how Snape handles Harry when he's emotionally charged. Well done, can't wait for the next chapter :)
| Title: Broken Boy
| 03 Dec 2010 10:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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I loved this chapter!!! Please update soon!
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