| Title: Chapter 1
| 04 Aug 2020 5:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I loved both of them and sympathised with the icy feet!
This is awesome! The fact that Snape realised Harry had wormed his way to his cold heart but welcomed it anyway was ...lovely.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 18 Jan 2013 4:39 am
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| Reviewer: Wil (Anonymous)
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Its adorable to see Snape being a father to Harry. Good job!
Little Harry and Big Sevvy!!! *squees*
| Title: Chapter 1
| 10 Jan 2011 2:40 pm
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| Reviewer: nad (Anonymous)
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Awww it's so heartwarming to imagine Snape as a father figure, albeit in his own Snape-like way.
And I love the way you write. It really pulls me in into the story. :)
| Title: Chapter 1
| 15 Dec 2010 6:55 pm
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| Reviewer: dtjy (Anonymous)
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its pretty refreshing to see Snape being so forthcoming with his affection for Harry. kinda too good to be true *rubs eyes*
good handling of development of plot, details, chraracterisation for a start.
Aww I love this so far! It's so sweet! Great job!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 11 Dec 2010 4:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Mari (Anonymous)
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Hi
good story,but it's a Father'story,not a sevitus o severitus...
Severitus:
Harry is Severus BIOLOGICAL son and you must follow the rules in here:
http://www.severitus.net/thechallenge.htm
Sevitus:
Harry is Severus biological son but there aren't rules to follow.
I hope someone will write a good severitus o sevitus soon...I love them better!
Kiss^-^
What a great beginning. The detail of Harry afraid in a storm was great. Please let the dursleys suffer, can't wait to read more.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 11 Dec 2010 9:06 am
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| Reviewer: txn (Signed)
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excellent start! can't wait for more.
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