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Title: Chapter 5 04 Aug 2020 7:43 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a good chapter
Title: Chapter 5 09 Apr 2011 3:17 am
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great fic!!
    I like Gwen and I hope her and Sev get together!
    I can't wait for him to start teaching and see what else happens:))
    Great job!!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, I'm excited about what comes next too...lols...but really, thank you for your support

Title: Chapter 5 27 Mar 2011 11:14 pm
Reviewer: libbyL (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sequal sequal sequal sequal

    Author's Response: comin' comin' comin!
Title: Chapter 5 08 Feb 2011 2:53 am
Reviewer: Rose (Anonymous) [Report This]
    daddy...snape XD i still find it weird and a little OOC but u got me surprised (in a good way) when a girl popped out of no where XD mommy...dumbledore playing matchmaker. OMG. i
Title: Chapter 5 12 Jan 2011 4:05 am
Reviewer: Sirena (Signed) [Report This]
    Well I don't see here sign 'The end' so I'm waiting for another chapter!! I even demand it :> (well it can be sequel if you prefer, I can live with it too, but definitely need more!)

    Hmm, one thing - age matter.
    You said Harry was with relatives 6 years, he should be send there when he was about 1 year old so it would be 7 and you said he's 9. His character would suit better to 7 year old too.

    Author's Response:

    Hmmm, but I really think that at the age of 7, he couldn't express himself as clearly in words... I've been telling readers that children from abused families tend to mature slower.

    Thank you so much for pointing the mistake out, I'll go and change it right away.

    Nope, this is not the last chapter, another one's coming. The reason I wanted it to be a sequel is because the new story occurs when Harry starts school at Hogwarts:D

    Thanks for the review and support, cheers!

Title: Chapter 5 11 Jan 2011 10:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I am up for a sequel! Thank you for a lovely story
Title: Chapter 5 11 Jan 2011 5:22 am
Reviewer: channeling_snape (Signed) [Report This]
    Do you have a beta? You deviate from the past tense in the second sentence. This must be a new record. As for your supposed Twilight reference, I assure you that this insipid pap and any references thereunto are entirely beneath my notice, and should be beneath yours as well. I suggest you concentrate your efforts upon the more deserving fandom which, you will notice, is the actual subject of this site.

    Author's Response:

    Nope I don't have a beta, will go back and check my tenses, though, this was kind of done in a rush, thank a lot for pointing it out.

    Thanks for the review, don't worry, I'm a twi-hater. Just thought it fun to add this bit in.

    It's refreshing to hear some criticism apart from the praises I've been getting, so thanks for being so forthcoming with the responses.

Title: Chapter 5 10 Jan 2011 11:14 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't know enough about Twilight to know what you mean.....have so enjoyed this story. I love "little Harry" stories.

    Author's Response:

    Hahahahhaha, totally loved that. I'm a twi-hater, so yeah...

    Thank you for your review and support!

Title: Chapter 5 10 Jan 2011 6:03 pm
Reviewer: Danneel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is great but why do you have to use Little Harry everytime? He's nine so I doubt he's that little. Little Harry would sound nice if he were six or younger.

    Author's Response:

    Because it's cute? I know a lot of people have a problem with the age thing.

    I suppose that people from abused families tend to be younger than they seem and if Harry were six, he wouldn't have been able to express himself in words as clearly and all.

    Nine is actually a young age. It may seem old, but it's not. Nine-year-olds can act this way too.

    Thank you for the review and your support, I really appreciate readers pointing out things like this.

Title: Chapter 5 10 Jan 2011 3:16 pm
Reviewer: nad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, that was an emotional rollercoaster. Fear for Harry and Snape when Harry got lost, relief when 'Miss Roslyn' found Harry, amusement at Dumbledore's matchmaking attempts and lightheartedness at the sweetness of it all. :)

    And I so totally caught the Twilight references okay! :D

    Nice job! Me wants a sequel!

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