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Reviews For Nightmares
I like Gwen and I hope her and Sev get together! I can't wait for him to start teaching and see what else happens:)) Great job!! Author's Response: Thank you, I'm excited about what comes next too...lols...but really, thank you for your support
Author's Response: comin' comin' comin!
Hmm, one thing - age matter. You said Harry was with relatives 6 years, he should be send there when he was about 1 year old so it would be 7 and you said he's 9. His character would suit better to 7 year old too. Author's Response: Hmmm, but I really think that at the age of 7, he couldn't express himself as clearly in words... I've been telling readers that children from abused families tend to mature slower. Thank you so much for pointing the mistake out, I'll go and change it right away. Nope, this is not the last chapter, another one's coming. The reason I wanted it to be a sequel is because the new story occurs when Harry starts school at Hogwarts:D Thanks for the review and support, cheers!
Author's Response: Nope I don't have a beta, will go back and check my tenses, though, this was kind of done in a rush, thank a lot for pointing it out. Thanks for the review, don't worry, I'm a twi-hater. Just thought it fun to add this bit in. It's refreshing to hear some criticism apart from the praises I've been getting, so thanks for being so forthcoming with the responses.
Author's Response: Hahahahhaha, totally loved that. I'm a twi-hater, so yeah... Thank you for your review and support!
Author's Response: Because it's cute? I know a lot of people have a problem with the age thing. I suppose that people from abused families tend to be younger than they seem and if Harry were six, he wouldn't have been able to express himself in words as clearly and all. Nine is actually a young age. It may seem old, but it's not. Nine-year-olds can act this way too. Thank you for the review and your support, I really appreciate readers pointing out things like this.
And I so totally caught the Twilight references okay! :D Nice job! Me wants a sequel! |
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