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Reviews For A Father's Love
Title: The Letter 25 Sep 2017 1:12 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    You asked what I thought? I thought that this is a very used idea but still a popular one nonetheless because every person can change Harry and Severus' path of bonding, which is the most fun and important part.
    The delayed letter, obliviated memories, hidden secret, glamours, blood adopting and all that nonsense is just a little filler
    You have given your story a very boring start, but I don't dislike the story because of that, rather I dislike it because you chose to abandon this story instead of continuing it.
    As for how I found this chapter, it was engaging, making us want to read further, you added the change by sending the letter to Remus instead of Snape, Harry or Dumbledore. Your grammar and writing skills are brilliant. Just try to update every once in a while. Maybe once a month? Or once every three months?
Title: The Letter 01 Jul 2008 10:37 am
Reviewer: HyperWriter (Signed) [Report This]
    Only one chapter? Aw, I'm disappointed. Well, I hope you decide to update soon. The story is good so far. A interesting new way of explaining how Snape came to be Harry's father.
Title: The Letter 22 Oct 2006 8:21 pm
Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This has been done numerous time.  However, I feel as if you could truly make this your own starting with the next chapter and Harry coming in to his true inheritance.  Can't wait until you update. Looking forward to reading more.  Thanks
Title: The Letter 06 Jul 2006 10:55 pm
Reviewer: Kaira Dmitri (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought that this was very touching. But just as a question, does Lily know what happened to Snape that made him such a bad person?!?!?just wondering. I think that this is a very good explanation, though kind of obvious, good job!
Title: The Letter 06 Jul 2006 10:55 pm
Reviewer: Kaira Dmitri (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought that this was very touching. But just as a question, does Lily know what happened to Snape that made him such a bad person?!?!?just wondering. I think that this is a very good explanation, though kind of obvious, good job!
Title: The Letter 20 May 2006 5:39 am
Reviewer: Fairycatcher1 (Signed) [Report This]
    CONTINUE!
Title: The Letter 03 Apr 2006 12:05 am
Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great chapter i look forward to read more soon.
Title: The Letter 03 Apr 2006 12:05 am
Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great chapter i look forward to read more soon.
Title: The Letter 25 Mar 2006 7:58 am
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    any chance of an update?
Title: The Letter 21 Mar 2006 1:07 pm
Reviewer: potion demon (Signed) [Report This]
    oooh i like this first chapter please write more its great

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