You asked what I thought? I thought that this is a very used idea but still a popular one nonetheless because every person can change Harry and Severus' path of bonding, which is the most fun and important part. The delayed letter, obliviated memories, hidden secret, glamours, blood adopting and all that nonsense is just a little filler You have given your story a very boring start, but I don't dislike the story because of that, rather I dislike it because you chose to abandon this story instead of continuing it. As for how I found this chapter, it was engaging, making us want to read further, you added the change by sending the letter to Remus instead of Snape, Harry or Dumbledore. Your grammar and writing skills are brilliant. Just try to update every once in a while. Maybe once a month? Or once every three months?
Only one chapter? Aw, I'm disappointed. Well, I hope you decide to update soon. The story is good so far. A interesting new way of explaining how Snape came to be Harry's father.
Title: The Letter
| 22 Oct 2006 8:21 pm
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Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous)
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This has been done numerous time. However, I feel as if you could truly make this your own starting with the next chapter and Harry coming in to his true inheritance. Can't wait until you update. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks
I thought that this was very touching. But just as a question, does Lily know what happened to Snape that made him such a bad person?!?!?just wondering. I think that this is a very good explanation, though kind of obvious, good job!
I thought that this was very touching. But just as a question, does Lily know what happened to Snape that made him such a bad person?!?!?just wondering. I think that this is a very good explanation, though kind of obvious, good job!
Title: The Letter
| 03 Apr 2006 12:05 am
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Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous)
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great chapter i look forward to read more soon.
Title: The Letter
| 03 Apr 2006 12:05 am
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Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous)
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great chapter i look forward to read more soon.
oooh i like this first chapter please write more its great
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