Oooo... I love how this is starting. *grin* Even if Severitus fics are getting a little old by now, I still love 'em! *grin* It's amusing to see how each one differs from the rest and you've already started this one different from the others I've read. Usually the letters go strait to Harrry or Severus. Great start! More Please! ASAP!
| Title: The Letter
| 17 Feb 2006 10:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Berenene (Anonymous)
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LOVE IT!!! WRITE SOME MORE PLZ!!!!!
Awesome!I can't wait to see what happens.Keep it up.It never really surprised me that Snape was Harry's Biological father.
| Title: The Letter
| 04 Nov 2005 1:42 am
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| Reviewer: Mort (Anonymous)
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Hmm...good stuff. Although Italics would be nice, since it's difficult to tell where Lily ends and Remus begins etc.
| Title: The Letter
| 18 Sep 2005 7:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Schipperke (Anonymous)
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I love this story. Please, please, please write more.
| Title: The Letter
| 13 Jul 2005 2:17 pm
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| Reviewer: jw (Anonymous)
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i like it i wish to see what will happen
| Title: The Letter
| 30 May 2005 11:59 pm
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| Reviewer: WingsOfAnAngel (Anonymous)
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I really like it so far and it'll be interesting to see how both Snape and Harry take the news!!! Update soon!
| Title: The Letter
| 04 Apr 2005 3:39 am
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| Reviewer: i live in darkness_9 (Anonymous)
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i love ur chap! please update as soon as possible!
| Title: The Letter
| 30 Mar 2005 7:29 am
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| Reviewer: Iniysa (Anonymous)
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Loved the chapter! Looking forward to more. :) P.S. Are you also posting this at Fanfiction.net? That's the only place I can save stories so that I can come back to them to find out if they have been up-dated.
| Title: The Letter
| 22 Feb 2005 5:00 am
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| Reviewer: A concerned reader (Anonymous)
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I think you've done a spot of plagiarising, actually. Perhaps it was not fully intentional, but it's obvious you've used the letter from Gateway Girl's 'Blood Magic' as a starting point.
Just a friendly warning--you haven't changed enough. In particular some of the phrasing (which is almost identical--"this letter is bespelled..." and ) and the "messy haired smiley face" which is lifted right out of the letter in 'Blood Magic'.
The concept of a letter sent to the future is generic enough, I wouldn't worry about that--but you do need to change the phrasing, or it's plagiarism. Also I can see that your backstory is different, which is also good. Just be careful.
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