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Title: The Christmas Dance 10 Jul 2006 10:36 pm
Reviewer: Serena Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    While I like your story very much, I can't condone for copying another's work. The scene with Lily and Snape dancing was taken from another fanfiction. I can't remember the title at the moment, but it was about Harry being caught in the fire at the Dursleys and sent to Severus for protection by a goddess. Then he goes in the founder's dimension and comes back. There's a new student at Hogwarts. He changes his name to Sebastien Frostpine I think - and I know that the dance scene was taken from there. Harry and the other student danced together - they were learnt the Art of Dance by the Founders. He was a fire elemental and she a water elemental I think. Or was it the other way around.
Title: The Christmas Dance 03 Nov 2005 9:09 pm
Reviewer: Myrddin Ambrosius (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Classes were cancelled for Christmas Day?  This is a BIG goof.  There *are* no classes on Christmas Day. Students should have left to go home for Christmas I think a week before Christmas day, to return just after New Year's.  A ball would have been announced several weeks, if not months, ahead of time, so everyone would have time to prepare, it would not have been left tothe last minute. 

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