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Title: The Christmas Dance 03 Nov 2005 9:09 pm
Reviewer: Myrddin Ambrosius (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Classes were cancelled for Christmas Day?  This is a BIG goof.  There *are* no classes on Christmas Day. Students should have left to go home for Christmas I think a week before Christmas day, to return just after New Year's.  A ball would have been announced several weeks, if not months, ahead of time, so everyone would have time to prepare, it would not have been left tothe last minute. 
Title: Untitled 03 Nov 2005 6:50 pm
Reviewer: Myrddin Ambrosius (Anonymous) [Report This]

    transform - to change

    transfer - to give to someone else, to exchange

     I think you meant energy-transferring potion

Title: Voldemort's Plan 03 Nov 2005 6:28 pm
Reviewer: Myrddin Ambrosius (Anonymous) [Report This]

    "They want to kill James Potter so Harry will >crease< to live."

    crease - a fold, like the crease in dress pants.

    cease - to end, to die, to stop. 

Title: Voldemort's Plan 09 Sep 2005 2:35 am
Reviewer: Katie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was a good chapter
Title: Untitled 05 Aug 2005 3:02 am
Reviewer: siriuslymental (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it would like to see more...Please!!!!!!
Title: At Hogwarts? 24 Feb 2005 7:30 pm
Reviewer: SlythCat19 (Signed) [Report This]
    I've just finished reading the second chapter and am wondering if Harry is in his sixth year in this fic, what are the Weasley twins doing at Hogwarts since they were in their seventh and final year during Order of the Phoenix. Other than that, it is very good so far.
Title: The Arrival 20 Feb 2005 2:55 pm
Reviewer: Nefla (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yeah, it was short, but it was still pretty good. I like how you had Marge going the beating rather than the Dursleys. It's an original spin on the whole "abused Harry" thing.
Title: Untitled 03 Feb 2005 1:40 am
Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Signed) [Report This]
    *eyes wide* Wow... This is a Wicked fic!!! *grin* I love this!! But.. why are they staying in the past if they had already dealt with the future DE's attack? *tilts head* Not that I'm complaining, Just wondering. Excellent fic! NEXT CHAPPIE!

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