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Title: Harry's Brother and the Great Cupboard Ambush 05 Feb 2011 6:01 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! I'm glad you decided to write a sequel. I've enjoyed seeing Harry and his new family make plans for the summer and work to fix up the house. I especially enjoyed the trip to Grimmauld Place, Sirius' jealousy (very realistic and I hope he can learn to see that Molly is right), and how the Weasleys are accepting Draco, in their own unique way, lol. It was even better that Fred and George made Harry 'a special case' and that Draco was so protective of his brother.

    But no...what a cliffhanger to end on! Severus needs to get out of there! I hope he'll be all right; his boys need him.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the lengthy review! I'm glad you liked the scene with Sirius. Poor Draco still has to impress Ron though ...
Title: Harry's Brother and the Great Cupboard Ambush 05 Feb 2011 5:20 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh man, evil cliffy. Update soon

    Author's Response: Oh yes, I am quite horrible aren't I? And don't worry, an update will come fairly soon! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Harry's Brother and the Great Cupboard Ambush 05 Feb 2011 12:52 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    What a cliffhanger! You are evil!!

    I was happy to see a sequel to DWLF, as I really enjoyed that story. Fred and George's "initiation" made me laugh, although I was thinking the same thing as Draco - they didn't lock *Harry* in a cupboard, did they? Because that would be just cruel... I'm glad they didn't; in canon, Fred and George's jokes can get borderline cruel, and I never liked that about them.

    And I do hope we get the next chapter soon; I can't wait to see what Voldy is up to this time...

    Looking forward to more!

    Sita

    Author's Response: How do I live with myself? Making writing such horrible cliffhangerst that is. I'm glad you liked the cuboard initiation, I was considereing not putting that in because I thougt people might not like it or something! I'm glad I did now. Thank you for the long review, I do love feedback!
Title: Say Hello to Chaos and Anarchy 04 Feb 2011 8:53 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Sev is being so sweet! more please

    Author's Response: More will come! Thanks so much for the review!
Title: Say Hello to Chaos and Anarchy 02 Feb 2011 5:26 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY!! I'm so happy there's a sequel. :D Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon :D

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I figure the next update will be over the weekend.
Title: Say Hello to Chaos and Anarchy 02 Feb 2011 8:12 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    *squeals* YAY!!!!!!!! I love it already!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Glad to hear from you!
Title: Say Hello to Chaos and Anarchy 02 Feb 2011 7:06 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, first to comment. Literal bang or no, this story left an emotional bang. I really liked it and I can't wait to continue it. I love Severus's 'Fatherly' moment. I also liked the flash back and I LOVED the animated furniture. I wonder if he could get any workman's comp if he was ran over by a wardrobe, even if it was from his own 'sons'... i guess workman's comp is only if he has to take off work. Nevermind.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it! The thought of Severus getting workman's comp for getting run over by a wardrobe is quite hilarious! Thansk for the review!

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