That was a good story. I am a sucker for de-aging stories, especially ones where Severus finally enjoys a happy childhood. And then when he finally regained his real age, Sirius apologized for the way he treated Sev in the past.
Author's Response: I'm happy that you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for taking the time to review!
The Supersev part was cute, especially when the other kids joined in the game. It was nice to see Sirius take care of the boggart. That should give him something to think about.
Author's Response: Oh Supersev ... I did love writing that part. Yes, Sirius should have a lot on his mind, shouldn't he? Thanks for the review!
I liked the scene between Ron and Draco. Now that Ron has that out of his system they should be able to at least tolerate each other. I am looking forward to Severus on the toy broom in the Quidditch game. He seems to be having a good time as a child.
Author's Response: I am quite pleased you liked Ron and Draco's scene. I wanted them to be able to throw some things at each other that would make them think, and therefore understand eachother a little more. Thanks for reviewing!
Poor Severus. Tortured by Death Eaters and then, when we thought he was rescued, deaged into a six-and-a-half year-old. At least he is enjoying being a child this time.
Author's Response: Yes indeed. Poor Severus ... Thanks for dropping a line!
I like the way the story is written from Severus' point of view. It makes an interesting read. I am also glad you decided to make a series of this AU. The first story was so good. I look forward to continuing the adventures.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I do love finding reviews after things have been completed.
*sniff* that was beautiful!
Author's Response: I am so happy that you liked it. Thank you for dropping a line!
awe! sevs so adorable!
Author's Response: Glad you think so. I thought him rather cute myself, so I'm glad you share my sentiments. Thank you for reviewing!
i thouroughly enjoyed this chapter!
Author's Response: Really! Thank you for the feedback!
Title: Shatter the World
| 05 Jun 2011 2:44 am
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Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous)
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this tickled my funny bone, supersev, lily lane that was priceless lol:)
Author's Response: Glad it made you laugh. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Shatter the World
| 04 Jun 2011 11:48 pm
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Reviewer: jazzy (Anonymous)
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loved it! Made me cry. So sweet! And SuperSev! LOL loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for sharing your opinion! :)
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