Potions and Snitches
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Title: This is Home 22 Mar 2011 1:51 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Love how you described Sev's transition from kid to adult, and his accompanying feelings and confusion. I'm glad he found another home after so many years.
    I also like your Dumbledore; Dumbledore's often portrayed as cold and manipulating in fanfic, but personally I think there's so much more to his character. I love how your story shows this!
    The last chapter - no! But I am looking forward to Sirius making an appearance :).
    Post soon please!
    Sita

    Author's Response: I'm gald you liked Severus' confusion. I wanted to throw a little of that in there, as we missed out on what it was like to make that transition for the person being re-aged in DWLF, as it's from Sev's perspective. Thanks for the feedback on Dumbledore! I was sort of wondering how I did him as a character, so this makes me feel really cheery! Thanks for the review!
Title: This is Home 22 Mar 2011 1:45 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well done. It is not disjointed. It is rather well written and shows a reconciliation for Sev with his past and present self.

    Author's Response: Glad you think so! I wasn't sure how well it flowed, and I'm relieved to know you don't think so! Thank you.
Title: This is Home 22 Mar 2011 9:08 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    yay. Love it :D

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! ;)
Title: See You on the Other Side 21 Mar 2011 1:58 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    I almost hate to see him have to grow up again, really. This summer has been so good for him, learning to trust people, and coming to understand that just because people yell and shout it doesn't mean that they are mean, just upset. My favorite bit? Gosh, ALL of it! :) I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and I wish you well with your tests and assignments.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far, and thanks for the well wishes regarding all my work! I appreciate the review!
Title: See You on the Other Side 21 Mar 2011 12:39 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so pleased you gave little Sev one more happy day (and a snitch victory), and us another warm,sun-on-your-back feeling chapter.

    Author's Response: Sun-on-you-back feeling, eh? That sure is a nifty way of putting it! Thanks for sharing. ;)
Title: See You on the Other Side 18 Mar 2011 10:06 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    It is sad to see Sev's last day but I can't wait to see big Sev's reaction to all the things he did. I especially look forward to Harry and Severus reuniting as I think he missed him as the adult although he enjoyed him being small.

    Author's Response: Severus is going to be positively mortified isn't he? Well, thank you so much for the review!
Title: See You on the Other Side 18 Mar 2011 11:44 am
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad little Sev had so much fun on his last day. I really liked your description of the blackberry patch; I could see the scene before me as I read it. Great job! And Sev's "lava adventurers" made me smile.
    It's kind of sad to see Sev go, but I'm very much looking forward to the adult Sev's reaction to his various misadventures!
    Good luck on your tests next week!
    Sita

    Author's Response: The lava adventures thing was actually something my brother and I used to do with tomato soup, so I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Title: See You on the Other Side 18 Mar 2011 7:23 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY. Lovely chappie :D Can't wait to see what happens next. I'll miss little Sev though

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it. I have to say, I will miss little Sev too.
Title: Runaway 15 Mar 2011 3:45 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I know we need our adult Severus back, but it would be nice if this Severus had a chance to grow up as a much beloved little boy.

    Author's Response: Yeah, I do sort of wish he could have that too! But alas, Slughorn has almost completed the potion for Dumbledore ...
Title: Runaway 15 Mar 2011 11:28 am
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    I really loved this chapter! Not too angsty, but it showed that Sev's childhood wasn't exactly idyllic, and that he's carrying baggage from it just like Harry is. I also liked that Harry found himself "on the other side", so to speak - he does tend to lash out at people who are trying to help him, and in the books everyone seems to tolerate it, more or less.
    I wish the story could go on and on! Do we get another trip into little Sev's imagination before he's re-aged? Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I wanted to show that Severus is a lot like Harry, and even Draco. Especially because adult Severus keeps his protective fortress up, even with those he cares about.  Anyway, I don't have an imagination trip scheduled, but I might be spontaneous! Thank you for the review!

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