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Reviews For A Life Unsettled
Title: Grasping at Straws 03 Feb 2011 7:16 pm
Reviewer: christy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW I started reading this last night and i am totally hooked!!! Cant wait to see what happens next!!! That was a major clift hanger!!!
Title: Isolated 03 Feb 2011 6:37 pm
Reviewer: LucySnapeDaughter-Of-Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    its really good
    i love your story
    cant wait for the next chapetr please update soon :D
Title: Isolated 03 Feb 2011 6:31 pm
Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Why is Ron being such a (male genitals)? Though, even in canon this would not be so out of character for him. I am glad to see that Lucius is not as nasty as he could have been, though someone like him would have a keen sense of reciprocal obligations. I would agree with Harry that he probably had a "come to Jesus" with Draco out of earshot, and good thing too. I want to find out why Snape is being so awful too. Write more soon.
Title: Isolated 03 Feb 2011 4:38 pm
Reviewer: AshleyAnesthetic (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh this chapter brought tears to my eyes!
    Please update soon I can not wait!!!!!

    - Ash
Title: Isolated 03 Feb 2011 4:25 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh. Snape is such a knot-head. Great beginning. Great emotions in this one. Can't wait for more.
Title: Isolated 03 Feb 2011 4:13 pm
Reviewer: fictionfan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good story, although Ron's defection seems a bit abrupt and I would have bet Molly and Arthur would have asked Harry to spend time with them regardless of Harry's Partentage. I would have also bet they would have had a word or two for our Potion's master.
    Malfoy's change of attitude towards Harry makes sense, a feeling of debt towards SS for taking care of Draco.
    Keep writing
Title: Isolated 03 Feb 2011 2:47 pm
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, really cool up to now.
    I can actually really see this happening!
    Please update soon, I am waiting eagerly :)
Title: Isolated 03 Feb 2011 12:53 pm
Reviewer: Marlie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ron is such a jerk! Although I can see him acting like that. Good story so far.
Title: Isolated 03 Feb 2011 11:14 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh poor Harry
Title: Isolated 03 Feb 2011 9:12 am
Reviewer: Oakleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    There's a lot of unresolved tension right now, and I'm looking forward to finding out how you're going to resolve it.
    Great work so far, I look forward to more!

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