Hah! Pride goeth before a fall :) I wonder how many Gryffindor points Harry will lose before he works out where to draw the line; the PMS remark (which was hilarious) certainly deserved a few points off. Quite a clever device, actually, to show both parties the error of their ways ^^. Very well written, with a witty, sparky dialogue.
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! Glad you liked it! Harry will probably lose many, many more points before he learns to bite his tongue. :D
Thanks again for the compliments! ^_^