It is a rare thing that a writer truly imprints the emotions of a story onto the reader but you have managed it wonderfully
Did not expect Neville to die T^T
| Title: Snuffles and the Storyteller
| 28 Aug 2022 2:11 am
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| Reviewer: dex (Signed)
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I cried basically every chapter! Absolutely beautiful, I've read this through at least 3 times and still come back to it. Thank you so much for sharing!
Wow. I loved this story. I laughed and even got teary eyed in a few chapter. You are an amazing storyteller!
That was a really good story.
I am still utterly P.O.-ed that you killed Neville; and I'm not going to say that that wasn't the reason I only reviewed twice, because it totally was and you totally deserve the punishment.
However, it was an amazing story. I really liked it and would probably be more okay with Nev's death if I'd been warned and talked myself up to it, but gonna be honest you lost points for that.
Anyway, I loved the different dynamics and how Harry handled it all and the wizarding culture you put in it, that wasn't Rowling's.
I hate you. I honestly just hate your eFFing guts.
I had to talk myself into reading this story, and then you killed Neville. I'm trying to redicide if I'm going to read it, because Honestly, what you've done is inexcusable. Unforgivable.
I'm seriously just really pissed off right now.
| Title: Snuffles and the Storyteller
| 20 Aug 2021 6:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Mrs-S (Signed)
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Wow, what a ride. I loved this story so much I had to create a profile just so I could review it! I don’t want to spoil anything for anyone else ... So let me just say that where one say that character appear out of character there is an excellent device to explain why that is, but it’s not so OOC that you don’t recognize the character.
I liked that you were critical of Dumbles machinations without bashing the character.
Well done handling sensitive subjects, however now I have to buy a new box of tissues **sniff**
Definitely will be worth a 2nd read though.
... you can do cpr on a living person, you just dont do it on a breathing easily person.
Also it amused me that you said something about the princess bride, as i am currently wearing a fezzik/andre the giant shirt as i read this
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