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Reviews For Death Wish
Title: Chapter 1 27 Feb 2011 11:16 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great start. I'm looking forward to more.
Title: Chapter 1 27 Feb 2011 9:32 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    You got me hooked! I'm settling in with popcorn and anxiously awaiting the next installment.
Title: Chapter 1 27 Feb 2011 9:05 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that's so good yet so sad! Great job and update soon!
Title: Chapter 1 27 Feb 2011 11:03 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow Very Intersting will sev do it or will he scream and maybe laugh in harry's face....more please
Title: Chapter 1 27 Feb 2011 9:12 am
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh. I have an idea how Snape's gonna react. But then again, maybe you;ll surprise me. It's been so long since I've been captivated by a story from the first chapter. Update soon! I can't wait to see Snape's reaction. Perhaps he'll cast a sleeping charm on Harry and just let him sleep while he works it out. that's what i'd have done. Good work. I've always been a fan on how you keep the characters in-character. Update update update!!!
Title: Chapter 1 27 Feb 2011 7:57 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    wow! great first Chapter! i can't wait for the next one, to see what Snape does about Harry little proposal.
Title: Chapter 1 27 Feb 2011 6:07 am
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Wonder what Snape is going to do? As much as he probably wants to, I don't think Snape would actually kill Harry. Guess I won't know until another chapter is posted. LOL
Title: Chapter 1 27 Feb 2011 5:58 am
Reviewer: wandlorean (Signed) [Report This]
    But forgive you? Hardly. Oh, I’ll make sure you’re exonerated, and that you get your due—Merlin First Class or whatnot, but personally, I could care less if you rot in hell. You’ve been nothing but a cruel bastard to me, even if you saved my life more often than I realized. You’d have just as soon seen me die if you hadn’t been beholden to Dumbledore.”

    Forgive me for the serious lack of eloquence I am about to display.

    HELL. FREAKING. YES.

    This is... I can't even... wow, just wow. I never jumped on the 'Snape-totally-and-completely-redeemed-himself-and-he-didn't-really-hate-Harry-all-that-much-and-he-deserved-to-be-forgiven-because-he-was-really-just-a-flawed-guy-and-he-wasn't-really-that-bad.'

    No. Snape was a cruel bastard despite the fact that he continually saved Harry's life and was really fighting for the good side. Had he not made the vow to protect Harry, he wouldn't have given a damn if the boy died. When he died, he was still just as nasty and spiteful as he'd always been; the fact that he spent years honoring a promise didn't change that. I can't stand it when people try to justify his vicious behavior. I love Snape and I feel like it's a disservice to the character to excuse everything he was--all of his nastiness and bullying--because of the fact that he was secretly a spy who loved Lily and saved Harry's neck. None of those things changed his true nature. Harry had every right to be angry with Snape, even after the man died, for the way Snape treated him for so long. Not a lot of fans seem to understand that or even want to consider it.

    This story is absolutely delicious so far. I love Harry's anger. I love the little things, like Snape having some gray hairs and Harry noticing how expressive his eyes are. And what Harry is asking him to do? My god. I can't wait to see how this unfolds!

    I trust you. I am a huge fan of 'The Knowledge of One' and 'China Cat'. You have a way of keeping Snape in character and not too many people can do that. You are someone who really understands the complexities of this character, who isn't afraid to write him in all of his harsh, nasty, and unfair glory. And for all of those reasons, it's definitely safe to say you are the one who can take us on this journey and make it believable. I don't like the way most authors write Snape, but I absolutely love and admire the way you write him (I like seeing my favorite character written exactly the way he is in canon). I know that Snape can be put in your hands and that you will do something wonderful with him.

    Extremely original and intriguing idea.

    You get ten raving frogs from me!

    Anxiously anticipating the next chapter. I apologize for the rant, haha. :)

    Author's Response: Wow. Thank you! I'm suddenly feeling a lot of pressure to live up to your expectations :-) I hope I can manage it. :-)

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