Awwww! I'm so sad this story is unfinished, I've been enjoying it!
| Title: The Cat Book
| 06 May 2021 5:18 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Honestly I'm getting into it. Good job on this story!
| Title: Gather Up The Past
| 05 May 2021 2:04 pm
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And she should! Literally just confessed that he basically told voldie he could do whatever he wants to her child as long as he gets her. Thats obsessive, creepy behavior. On top of her having just learned that he had the audacity to continue to treat her child like crap after he thought she was gone ... I can't see any normal person just forgiving that. Eventually, yes, even I would. But right away, not a chance
| Title: Farther Forward
| 05 May 2021 1:46 pm
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She freaking finally stands up for her child! I mean I get she's a bit lost right now, barely know harry, had more years with severus in fact. But she's still his mom and she shouldn't have let snape treat him the way he has been for this long. He's made no bones about tht fact that he allows harry to stay only cause he wants lily. And she's over here making moon eyes and the guy who's terrifying her child. 😔 Don't get me wrong, I like the fatherly way he is starting to act --though harry is more childish than canon portrayed -- and I like that it's all kinda fitting. It's just that I keep waiting for her to be harry's mom first rather than severus' best friend first
| Title: Farther Forward
| 05 May 2021 1:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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She freaking finally stands up for her child! I mean I get she's a bit lost right now, barely know harry, had more years with severus in fact. But she's still his mom and she shouldn't have let snape treat him the way he has been for this long. He's made no bones about tht fact that he allows harry to stay only cause he wants lily. And she's over here making moon eyes and the guy who's terrifying her child. 😔 Don't get me wrong, I like the fatherly way he is starting to act --though harry is more childish than canon portrayed -- and I like that it's all kinda fitting. It's just that I keep waiting for her to be harry's mom first rather than severus' best friend first
| Title: Farther Forward
| 05 May 2021 1:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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She freaking finally stands up for her child! I mean I get she's a bit lost right now, barely know harry, had more years with severus in fact. But she's still his mom and she shouldn't have let snape treat him the way he has been for this long. He's made no bones about tht fact that he allows harry to stay only cause he wants lily. And she's over here making moon eyes and the guy who's terrifying her child. 😔 Don't get me wrong, I like the fatherly way he is starting to act --though harry is more childish than canon portrayed -- and I like that it's all kinda fitting. It's just that I keep waiting for her to be harry's mom first rather than severus' best friend first
| Title: Temporary Home
| 05 May 2021 4:18 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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It *is* unfair; snape is acting like harry's dad, like he didn't make harry's life hell at hogwarts. I mean I love a good Severitus or sevitus story but some realistic buildup would be awesome. I mean, harry's got that defiant spark they made him tell off draco and they made him go with hagrid even when vernon was saying he couldn't go. He's not a bad kid but I also don't think he'd just fall in line with snape's orders like this, at least not without having lily or dumbledore confirm it all
| Title: A Long Night
| 05 May 2021 4:05 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I'm not sure about how she seems to be forgiving of what he's basically started straight out (that he hated her husband, hates her son, and treats her son like crap) ... Most stories with Lilly tend to go that way for some reason though, disappointing as it is. But I shall not judge until I've read a bit further at least. Fingers crossed
I have a theory! So snape begged voldie to spare her right? And he even told her to move aside. So maybe he sent her somewhere (the house she keeps mentioning) and he intended to take snape to her later but of course he blew himself up when he tried to kill harry so she's been stuck there all this time cause nobody knew but voldie and voldie is a shade somewhere (actually I can't remember what year this is, or how old harry is right now so if it's after 4th hear, then maybe voldie remembered her and set her free)
| Title: The Stranger
| 05 May 2021 2:46 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Hmm.... The house isn't a solid story yet... But I like her better than petunia already so let's give it up for blind trust! Lol oh I hope she sees how snape treats harry really, that foul loathsome cockroach
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