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Title: Theoretical Solution 14 Apr 2012 4:42 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Pince
Title: Theoretical Solution 07 Jun 2011 10:12 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    i don't think it's so bad that Dobby now belongs to Harry. it was dobby's idea after all, and he was the one who offered his services!

    wonderful chapter!
Title: Theoretical Solution 27 Mar 2011 8:39 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    Dobby was a brilliant choice :) I just hope that Harry remembers to tell Dobby to keep Toby from being found out.
Title: Theoretical Solution 21 Mar 2011 11:08 pm
Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful! Bravado!
    I liked this chapter so much, especially when Madam Pince looked at them. It would definitely remind her a lot of Severus and Lily considering how she had saw them both together so often.

    I don't really like Hermione in this chapter and I don't think I have to explain why that is. She really should have a least mentioned something to them instead of letting Harry think all was lost. And all because of her obsession wit freeing house-elves from Slavery.
    Doesn't she understand that some want to do it?

    One of my favourite parts is when Harry actually bonds with Dobby. Harry should have known not to let Dobby choose his own clothes. I just love that line 'Perhaps Harry should have chosen the attire.' And I imagine the look on Harry's face would have been classic!

    You also made me very happy by the letter, I do very much enjoy reading Severus' letters. The are so very well worded, good job on that. I love the way you can do Snape so very well, you would swear it is from the book itself!

    On a funnier note, Dumbledore is up to his old tricky self again. Although I am curious how he got Phineas to help him... is it like like a rule that the portraits have to obey the Headmaster or something?

    Anyway I could go on however if I did I would run out f time to read and reveiw your next chapter! Thank you for the quick updates, BYE!!

    Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm pleased to hear it. Indeed. Yes, no one really likes Hermione in this chapter, although it won't last long. Haha, yeah, Harry should've known Dobby would do something like that. Oh well, too late now. Glad you like the letters. And wow, really? Well thank-you! And yes, all portraits of the previous headmasters/headmistresses do have to obey the current headmaster, it's part of their role in that office. Thanks for the review!
Title: Theoretical Solution 21 Mar 2011 12:32 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter thank you
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 2:17 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter =o)
    I would like to ask: Does Severus know that he has two sons? From the chat with Tonks I think he knew about Harry, but does he know about Toby? Does he know that Toby's orphanage burned down and that Toby is supposedly dead for muggles? I would like to see his reaction when he discovers that his youngest son is 'dead' and than that he is alife... =o)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. However, I cannot answer that question. The details of the conversation with Tonks is not quite as specific as you assume. He does not think his son is dead, because he has no idea who Toby is and therefore even if the details of the burned down muggle orphanage were brought to his attention, it would be meaningless to him.

    Thanks for the review, will be updating soon.

Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 1:27 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah I knew Dobby would work, and you also answered another question about Dumbledore seeing through invisibility cloaks. Over all this chapter smoothed over some questions and readied the stage for the next chapter... I love this story!
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 11:50 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love where you are taking this how about child minding?
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 8:17 am
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful. I still think Dobby shouldn't have to be the one to mind Toby. Dobby's a bit, well, too enthusiastic and will probably give in to Toby's wishes. A six year old and a house elf.. *shudders* I like how you portrayed severus this time. It's kinda fun! And Pince? What's going on in that bookworm's head?? Oh my, so many questions. Update soon.

    And for the chapter idea, how bout... Temporary guardian? or Plan in Motion? i suck at these, so... haha. I know i'm no help. ^^

    Author's Response: Thanks. I agree, however given the circumstances there is no other choice available to Harry and Toby at the moment other than to use Dobby. He may be an enthusiastic creature, but he obeys Harry and the teenager has made sure that Dobby understands this. Part of the childminding that house-elves have as their duties make sure they don't do as the child says unless the parent/master has okayed it first.
    Glad to hear it. Haha, plenty is going on in Pince's head, some in which will be revealed at the appropriate time.
    Thanks for the suggestions. I wanted to use "Plan in Motion" but still a bit too similar.I liked the "motion" but rhymed with the one I ended up choosing. Thanks though, and I shall be updating soon.
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 8:07 am
Reviewer: Peach (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!

    "A Solution" perhaps?

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