Pandora = polyjuiced Snape ;)
*pats Harry on the head* Good big brother.
| Title: Not all Days are Great
| 17 May 2011 9:36 am
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| Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous)
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I really enjoyed this chapter and I definitely cannot wait to read more. I can't wait for Snape's next letter and more family moments. I know I say this every time but your chapters just keep getting better and better. I also found it adorable that Harry is 'sharing his mum' with Toby.
I am curious how Snape's is going to react to the decreased formal language, just one step closer to him finding out who it really is. I love the questions he asks an the answers that Harry replies with, a lot of Snape's are very entertaining and enjoyable, keep up the good work.
The family moments that managed to make their way into almost every chapter is just fabulous! I absolutely love family moments, whether it be all three, Snape and Harry or even Toby and harry! They are just so well done and I just cannot seem to et enough of them!
It was so cute that Toby and Harry are 'sharing mums'. I find it rather funny how they have it the other way round and how their father's are the same ye there mothers are not. I think it was very sweet of Harry to let him do that and I also think that Toby very much appreciated it. And speaking of sweet Toby moments, this was my fave quote for this chappie: 'Does that mean I can skip breakfast?'. FuNnY!! Loved it.
Off to read (and review) the next chapter so lots of hugs and kisses for the wonderful things you've been writing.
BYE!!!
| Title: Not all Days are Great
| 29 Mar 2011 12:21 am
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| Reviewer: Slegend (Signed)
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Awww....Harry loves his lil' bro!! So sweet of him to miss Quiddich of all things for him! Great Chapter!
| Title: Not all Days are Great
| 28 Mar 2011 11:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Harry seems to be learning a little repnsibility! Loved the chapter
I wonder if perhaps the door closed because Dumbledore was hiding there invisible and Harry just thought he had closed it on his own? It was just a thought since Dumbledore knows how to go invisible without a cloak, and since he knows about Harry and Toby. I can't imagine him knowing and just letting it go on without checking on them every now and again... unless Dobby has been reporting back?
Great as always! I can't wait for more! Seeing a new chapter brightened my day!
Author's Response: And interesting theory, however no, it wasn't Dumbledore this time. Although yes, he is getting reports from more than one source, having to keep tabs on the boys, of course.
Thanks, will be updating in a moment. :)
WONDERFUL!!! Oooh please have Harry be Snape's son-it would be AWESOME!! Oohh and here is another thing: make Harry due to many circumstances start acting and behaving more like Snape!!! Aah! That would be so cool-especially with all the Gryffindors having ot live with him! LOL! OH and please have Toby be Snape (explanation in one of my older reviews)-that would still be a great story!
Author's Response: Thanks! As my summary and the category for this fic states, Harry is indeed Snape's son, as is Toby. And as his son, Harry naturally takes after him as well, however it's not until recently that these things begin to become more noticeable, especially whe Harry's in a bad mood. Toby is not Snape, I am not going to change this, sorry. It doesn't work with the plot I want or where this is going.
I really like how Harry handled Toby's illness and Snape's letter. Good chapter :)
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