Title: As the Father Sleeps
| 15 Sep 2013 12:54 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter and wonderful that you are continuing the story thank you
Title: As the Father Sleeps
| 24 Aug 2013 11:00 pm
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Reviewer: Gillian Heron (Anonymous)
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I only just found this story last week and omg you have to finish it - i am in love with the story and i want to know what happens with Harry, Snape and Toby. Please continue with this story.
Title: As the Father Sleeps
| 06 Jun 2013 7:20 am
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Reviewer: Ruth (Anonymous)
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I love the story! I read it all in one sitting ;) If you need a beta, Im available. Im in such a state, you were too cruel with that cliff hanger haha
Title: As the Father Sleeps
| 29 May 2013 1:50 am
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Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous)
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WOW - this story has come sooooo far - I really really really hope you return to it and wrap it up.... so close to a "happy" ending (or as happy as you get in the angst filled world of Harry Potter)!! Please!!!
Title: As the Father Sleeps
| 17 Mar 2013 7:28 pm
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Reviewer: Dobby_246 (Anonymous)
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Hello :) i love this story sooooooo much, please please please update soon. this is one of my favourite snape is harry's dad stories ever. :)
Title: As the Father Sleeps
| 21 Feb 2013 9:43 am
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Reviewer: katala (Anonymous)
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such a great story! I know its been a long time but please please finish!
Gah, so close to finding out if Snape and Harry are going to accept each other! I hope you update quickly, i'm terribly curious!
This is amazing. I love this story. I love Toby. He's so cute. I can't wait for more.
Title: As the Father Sleeps
| 09 May 2012 9:20 am
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Reviewer: Alozk (Signed)
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Hey! I found this story three days ago, I decided to give it a shot and couldn't stop reading until I get here haha. To be honest at first I didn't think I was going to like it because I usually don't like child fics because many are very unreal and don't have a plot. However your fic very well written I love how you phrase everything. I love the story and love the fact that is very different from what we're used to read in severitus challenge, the usual letter from Lily and the surprise, this is different because both parts have had time to know a little bit from the other and when they'll know the truth is not going to be such a big shock. I love this Severus I think he is mostly in character which is hard to achieve (I can't do it I must say haha), Toby is at the same time awesome and I don't like him haha, he's way too mature to be six years old but he's very cool and I loved his heroic crusade to save his daddy, it was very sweet. I can't wait to know what is going to happen next!! I'm eager to know about the conversation they'll be having and the memory!!! I hope to read you soon!!
Your way with words is incredible - the phrase " The last grain of sand headed to the bottom and Harry had missed it" is very well said. Wonderful chapter; I liked the look back in time with Irma... Glad Harry is beginning to get the answers - now we just have to wait and see - on the memory as well as Severus. :)
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