Title: Hello, Father
| 06 Oct 2013 11:57 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter as how Severus reacted was completely IC.
beautiful chapter, I hope for another one (or ten) soon :)
Title: Many Things Come to an End
| 06 Oct 2013 8:15 pm
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Reviewer: Slegend (Signed)
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Oooohhhhh, good ending! I like that Harry is the Prince Heir. Can't wait for Snape to finally find out!
Title: Many Things Come to an End
| 06 Oct 2013 6:52 pm
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Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Woah, this is amazing. But when will Snape find out that Harry is his son too?
I can't wait for that. It would be nice if they could all live as a family and Harry and Toby live as real brothers.
I'm looking forward to the next update.
Oh I can just picture Sev's face when he realizes that the manor welcomed Harry when it didn't him.
Title: Many Things Come to an End
| 06 Oct 2013 3:16 pm
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Reviewer: YeCatsJ (Signed)
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Oho ooh, got a little sad there when Snape didn't take Harry but I suppose he still doesn't know the truth if Harry didn't tell him. Liked the end though. Can't wait for Harry to finally be rid of the dursleys.
Title: Many Things Come to an End
| 06 Oct 2013 2:36 pm
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Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
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Very emotional chapter, had me in tears in the office with the whole family. If Severus was angry with Harry because he kept Toby from him, what is he going to feel when he learns of the Prince house because he will know the significance of house opening up to Harry?
Totally got caught up in it. Nicely done. Hope it gets updated soon.
Author's Response: Happy to hear that, thanks. I will be updating again soon.
Normally I'm not a Harry Potter fanfic reader. Your video inspired me to try your story, though, and I must say I'm quickly falling in love with it.
Still very much enjoying this! I'd been expecting a wrap-up chapter here, but it seems we're just at the end of Act III....
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that. Oh, no we're not even halfway through this story yet. A sequal will follow as well. Plenty more of this story to be told ;) Thanks for the review, I will be updating again soon.
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