Oh, WOW! How did I miss this story when it first got posted??! *eyes bug out* I really enjoyed your creative streak in designing Death! Also, I enjoyed not only the interaction between Death & Harry, but also the friendly jibes between Death & Mother Nature. Quite a pair, those two! Hee! Then there's the troll... I could almost feel sorry for it! And Quirrell's swan song brings Death to Harry's doorstep once more! Glad to see that Death won't be actively hunting Harry, but how long will he bide his time? Terrific first chapter, Wands! But where's the rest of the story...? Waiting, waiting, etc. for an update! (*hints* This is a great summer story!) :-D
Lol! Really loved it, especially your depiction of Death. Please update soon!
Hehehe. I like your start. Hope to see more from you soon.
||08 Mar 2011 11:36 am
|Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
Loved it it is so surreal to be enjoyable thank you
what I love about this is all the different powers: Fate, Death, etc. Such a cool idea.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
Great job Wands, I look forward to the next chapter! :-D
Author's Response: Thanks! It's gonna be a hoot! :)
Very nice, Wands. I like your addition with showing the Quirrellmort scene, especially with keeping it short, choppy sentences like dreams. Your personification of Death and Nature are very unique. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks Lan! I was trying to emulate the sort of hazy feeling he had when he woke up in the books. Death and Nature struck me as the argumentative type. That is they enjoy arguing with each other., but at the end of the day, they're friends. I'm glad you liked it!
LOL!! I love it Wands!!
Death is freakin' awesome! I kinda want to meet him...errr...you know what I mean. Great character there Wands! I hope to see more of him soon!
I love the way Death is afraid of Mother Nature! That was perfect!! And all the creatures flying out of her hair LOL. Its too bad Snape won't remember any of that.
Excellent start! Can't wait to read more!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Death and Nature are friends, but it's kind of hard to NOT be afraid of someone like her. Sanpe will get plenty of memeories to make up for that one though. :D