I totally love this chapter. It's full of emotions and the ending is FABULOUS!
Looking forward to continuation!
| Title: The Light That So Shines
| 06 Jun 2011 7:23 am
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| Reviewer: ME! (Anonymous)
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I read this story when you posted it, and then kept at it, but I NEVER saw THIS chapter!! I came back to ask if you would finish it and found you had done it!!!
Job well done!! I love the story. Of course, I would like more, but I'm happy with what I have and won't be greedy...I WANT MORE...
Anyways, great story and great challenge!! I hope more people answer to it!!
Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
Me.
great chapter--wonderful story.
Thanks for sharing
V.
Yea!! Poor Harry and poor Sev. At least Harry has someone in his corner other then Ginny. (And he can keep his long hair!) Great story. Are you sure you don't want at least one add on of the two of them telling other people? No. Well the last few paragraphes made me smile. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. At some point I may reconsidder, but not now. I have so many unfinished stories I need to work on.
I hate to see this great story end. I would love to see more interaction between Harry and Snape as they build a life together as father and son.
I so love the entire story and this chapter is the cream of the cake! I want to know what happens next!
| Title: Past Tense
| 27 Apr 2011 11:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Woodi (Anonymous)
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Great story :) Looking for next chapter :)
| Title: Past Tense
| 27 Apr 2011 8:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter great scene between them although I'm not sure Severus would have forgotten him
Great chapter. Thanks for posting!
| Title: Past Tense
| 25 Apr 2011 2:14 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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