So why do I have the feeling that Harry is on the verge of a nervous break down? Maybe Snape should do the math that Harry did. He might get an interesting piece of knowledge. Who knows he might be using what Harry told him to keep the future on track. Can't wait to read more!!
Title: When Blindness Fails
| 08 Mar 2011 12:34 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I should think he'd run a mile after seeing his teacher in an intimate embrace! Pupils do not accept that their teachers have private lives! Great story thank you
.......its good....I'm a bit picky about time travel and how its done so i tend not to like them....that being said yours is executed in an interesting way that i find neither stupid nor annoying...which is rare....I'm excited to see the confrontation between Snape and Harry in the present....i can just see harry storming into Snape's office, slightly unaware of how much time is passed saying "How could you bang my mother? I thought we were friends."..........any way great job and please continue
I love it! I think he looks really sexy with short hair! Actually, I think Snape is sexy with any kind of hair, just not bald. Then he'd remind me of professor X!
I feel sorry for Harry, but he was warned and sometimes the truth hurts. Though I'm thinking that maybe Lily Obliviated Snape so he knew nothing of his child and then married James after she found out Sev had been a DE? That's why he knows nothing about Harry being his son and why harry looks like James.
I think harry will eventually confront Snape and hopefully they will come to a resolution. I would like to see a rather angry and upset Harry and a shocked and then confused but supportive Snape. Maybe Dumbledore had something to do with it as well?
I like this chapter, but I feel bad for Severus. Harry is certainly taking an awful risk revealing what he does to Severus also. On to the next part!
So the mirror keeps jumping about in time with Harry. I'm surprised it didn't show him that scene with James and Sirius setting Sev's pants on fire. That would have dispelled any doubt about how awful James was a t this age.
I hope Severus can save Lily.
I'm glad Harry saved Snape from James and Sirius. Father or godfather or not, what they were doing was wrong and Harry was right to step in and help. Harry would never condone bullying like that and I also like how you got round the whole Underage Use of Magic rule.
Very clever!
I also like how you described Snape's house and room, it sounds very realistic.
I love the picture! It really does look like a young Snape.
I had to laugh at Harry, trying to tell Snape not to touch Lily. And he really should have kept quiet and watched instead of introducing himself like that. He might have interfered with the time stream.
Where will Harry go now?
This is a great beginning. I like how the mirror is a portal to the past and how it warns Harry to be careful what he wishes for--he just might get it . . . and not like it.
Harry doesn't even know what a can of worms he's opened now, but he's about to find out. Can't wait to read the rest of this!
Title: When Blindness Fails
| 07 Mar 2011 9:08 pm
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Reviewer: CF (Anonymous)
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Major angst! Poor Harry, but he did get what he asked for. I only have one question:does Snape remember Harry popping up in his past??? If so, surely the first thought Snape had upon laying eyes on Harry at his sorting feast was something along the lines of 'Hey isn't that the boy who haunted me all those years ago....' So why hasn't he said anything, and why is he still a git to Harry?
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