This was a lovely story with a unique plot. I loved the characters and the way in which Harry ultimately learned to embrace his gift.
| Title: Epilogue
| 11 Sep 2014 3:19 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Lovely story. I enjoyed it very much, and I hope you are alive and well and able to appreciate the fact that people are still loving your stories.
| Title: Aftermath
| 11 Sep 2014 3:04 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Oh no, what about all those poor sailors out at sea, and people living along the shoreline?
| Title: Storm Building
| 10 Sep 2014 6:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Yes, I know part of the plot is that Harry is young, stupid, ignorant, and impulsive, but it seems like while he is still in training he and everyone else should be willing to shackle his magic during storms to prevent trouble. Yikes! Nice suspense writing.
| Title: Flying High
| 10 Sep 2014 2:28 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Oops! The boys were always supposed to tell and adult and get a charm to hide themselves from Muggles whenever flying.
| Title: The Unexpected Malady
| 10 Sep 2014 2:19 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Very exciting chapter. Well written. Interesting story. Only one complaint. Harry was cussing in this chapter, using wizard slang. He has no way of knowing all these phrases, since he grew up with Muggles.
| Title: Epilogue
| 18 May 2014 6:18 pm
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| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Anonymous)
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Yes please for the sequel you asked about in the chapter end notes.
So many babies! What an end :)
I like stories where Severus is a healer.
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