| Title: Settling In
| 03 Mar 2021 8:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love this story it is very well written it would be lovely if you could continue it
Oh man- this story is SO well written and has amazing potential. I’m so sad that you didn’t finish it....as someone who has come back to start re-writing my own story, I thought I’d leave a review to say:
1) You’re a great writer, your Snape is so wonderfully in character
2) Please please please consider coming back to this story.
I don’t think I’ve ever read an Apprentice story that I’ve really gotten into- but I was instantly into this fic, and know it would be awesome!
poor harry. i sure hope that harry is able to melt Severus Snapes heart. :)
| Title: Settling In
| 24 Oct 2013 4:36 am
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| Reviewer: rania (Anonymous)
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please continue please...
Have you plans to update this
I really hope you write more one day because the premise is brill!
Not sure how I feel about this one yet. A lot hinges on how Snape treats Harry so I'll withhold judgement until then. Seeing as it's been over a year since the last update, this might be for nothing. Abandoned stories are the worst! Your interest is peaked and then nothing!
I really hope you continue this one day, it's really interesting! So will the medical record show that Harry has not received proper nourishment?
Shopping should be traumatic enough, but why do I have the feeling that Severus is going to get a bit of suprising news when Poppy does her diagnostic? Please write more, I'm hooked!
What a neat beginning! I do hope that you will eventually continue this tale.
Well done thus far!
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