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Title: Just A Girl 30 Mar 2011 11:51 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this but would love to know how Harry knows he is Severus' son and if Kenai knows Severus must be telling some people. Please can we have some explanations on when harry found out ad everyone else thanks
Title: Just A Girl 30 Mar 2011 12:55 am
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    Please let something good happen to Harry for once1 it's so sad :(
    Is Snape going to find this notebook he keeps writing in? cause I'm gonna be really upset if he does...Kenai is a huge jerk. I hope something really bad happens to him!!
Title: Just A Girl 29 Mar 2011 10:18 pm
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, Harry & Ginny love, how cute :D I really like this story, and I think it's super original. I feel so bad for poor Harry, hated by his dad and brother :'( I wonder why they hate him so much. Can't wait to see where you take this! Update soon ^^
Title: Just A Girl 29 Mar 2011 9:59 pm
Reviewer: ceccecblue (Signed) [Report This]
    The only reasons I can think of as to why Snape would 'hate' Harry are
    a) He raped Lily and Harry is the product, hence the reason why she refused to name him Harry Snape and why every time Snape looks at Harry he hates him for existing. But this seems unlikely as she added 'severus' to his name. Under such extreme conditions one would think she would want to distance herself and her child from such a monster.
    b) Lily and Snape were together, but Snape did something so heinous that she left him, married James Potter giving Harry a different father and name. This seems more likely, but wouldn't completely explain why Snape loathes Harry, and why he would want to see him suffer. Unless of course the animosity is fake... but why would Snape fake it? Oblivate? but why?
    It strikes me that you are yet to reveal who Kenai's mother is..... Perhaps she is blackmailing Snape?
    c)There is a plot afoot, involving a very manipulative headmaster. Snape nor Kenai hate Harry at all but rather are playing a part to maintain an image in the eyes of other death eaters, so that should Voldermort come back Snape would be able to spy. This seems unlikely as Kenai, although friends with the children of death eaters openly declared in the middle of a lesson that the Dark Lord was back. Not a very clever move if you are allied to him.
    d) Harry is not Snape's son, or he is and Snape doesn't believe it. We have yet to understand why Harry would believe so strongly that Snape was his father, when Snape refuses to acknowledge it. 'Severus' isn't such a rare name, nor is looking a bit like somebody else reason enough. I think you need to convince us a bit more.
    d) something else.... Must be something big if you would knowingly allow your son to grow up in an abusive environment, even if there is a blood protection on the Dursley's house I can't imagine him turning a blind eye.

    I am interested to find out if something will happen which will cause Harry to give Snape his diary to read. I think a scene where Harry confronts Snape about his actions could be explosive and really bring things to ahead moving the plot along nicely.
    From what we've seen so far I'm not sure if things are going to end well.
    CF x

    Author's Response:

    Remember that in Harry's photo inside the front of his journal, Severus and Lily are both smiling as Lily holds baby Harry.  And have no fears, there will be a good ending.  As for not knowing about Kenai's mother, this is because at this point I want the reader to know only what Harry knows, which isn't much yet because he's been sort of kept out of the Snape family loop.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Just A Girl 29 Mar 2011 9:25 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this was awesome! can't wait to read more!
Title: Umbridge Hates You Too 29 Mar 2011 9:01 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this is very good, but i have to wonder what could cause snape to hate his own son so much?
Title: Just A Girl 29 Mar 2011 8:47 pm
Reviewer: octopus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ahhh, I love it! Your characterisations are always so awesome, and this seems like it's gonna be an awesome plotline.
    Moreplz kthnxbai :P
Title: Just A Girl 29 Mar 2011 4:48 pm
Reviewer: teddybear (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the way this story is going. An idea that I have - Have Harry get a detention with Snape and have it where Snape finds out what the toad did to Harry. Then have Snape get really pissed off at toad.

    It is a great story and I can't wait to read more of it.
Title: Just A Girl 29 Mar 2011 3:45 pm
Reviewer: Ariel C. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I would like to See Severus Snape accept Harry as his son. If that's possible? Cause this is so sad. Well written and I hope to read more chapters soon!
Title: Just A Girl 29 Mar 2011 11:08 am
Reviewer: anonymous.gr (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi! Your story is great! But please...if you intend at some point to make them reconcile and come together as a family, give the Snapes a really, REALLY hard time. Update soon!!! :-)))

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