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Reviews For My Secret Father
Is Snape going to find this notebook he keeps writing in? cause I'm gonna be really upset if he does...Kenai is a huge jerk. I hope something really bad happens to him!!
a) He raped Lily and Harry is the product, hence the reason why she refused to name him Harry Snape and why every time Snape looks at Harry he hates him for existing. But this seems unlikely as she added 'severus' to his name. Under such extreme conditions one would think she would want to distance herself and her child from such a monster. b) Lily and Snape were together, but Snape did something so heinous that she left him, married James Potter giving Harry a different father and name. This seems more likely, but wouldn't completely explain why Snape loathes Harry, and why he would want to see him suffer. Unless of course the animosity is fake... but why would Snape fake it? Oblivate? but why? It strikes me that you are yet to reveal who Kenai's mother is..... Perhaps she is blackmailing Snape? c)There is a plot afoot, involving a very manipulative headmaster. Snape nor Kenai hate Harry at all but rather are playing a part to maintain an image in the eyes of other death eaters, so that should Voldermort come back Snape would be able to spy. This seems unlikely as Kenai, although friends with the children of death eaters openly declared in the middle of a lesson that the Dark Lord was back. Not a very clever move if you are allied to him. d) Harry is not Snape's son, or he is and Snape doesn't believe it. We have yet to understand why Harry would believe so strongly that Snape was his father, when Snape refuses to acknowledge it. 'Severus' isn't such a rare name, nor is looking a bit like somebody else reason enough. I think you need to convince us a bit more. d) something else.... Must be something big if you would knowingly allow your son to grow up in an abusive environment, even if there is a blood protection on the Dursley's house I can't imagine him turning a blind eye. I am interested to find out if something will happen which will cause Harry to give Snape his diary to read. I think a scene where Harry confronts Snape about his actions could be explosive and really bring things to ahead moving the plot along nicely. From what we've seen so far I'm not sure if things are going to end well. CF x Author's Response: Remember that in Harry's photo inside the front of his journal, Severus and Lily are both smiling as Lily holds baby Harry. And have no fears, there will be a good ending. As for not knowing about Kenai's mother, this is because at this point I want the reader to know only what Harry knows, which isn't much yet because he's been sort of kept out of the Snape family loop. Thanks for the review!
Moreplz kthnxbai :P
It is a great story and I can't wait to read more of it.
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