Cool story!! I would love to see harry,his brother and Severus finally become a family.
Aw, I want to cry...tears of happiness that is. But of course there is also sadness for what Harry has missed. Great job JA!! I would love to see more of this universe. Perhaps with Harry and Severus trying to form a relationship and with Kenai also.
| Title: The Journal
| 12 Dec 2011 3:19 am
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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OHEMGEE! Okay! So in the next book...Lucius breaks out of Azkaban and kidnaps Draco, Harry and his crew go to rescue him. BUT at this same time (and long before that happens) Snape is trying to reconcile and going through the book (with emphasis about his emotions on what is in the book). Then at the very end, you could have them all staying at Snape Manor for the summer and getting to act like a real family. Which leaves it open to another book if you wish.
I wouldove to see more ofthis story line! maybe sev working working out harrys emotions
Awesome-sauce! I love you for finishing this, I do. :) And I'm glad that Kenai and Harry got whatever they were fighting about sorted out, I was kind of hoping they would.
And, oh my gosh, I've been wanting for Snape to read the journal! When he first saw it when he searched Harry's room and he put it back, I was like, "Nooo! Bad Snape, bad!". *glomps* And now he's reading it!
Umm, what I want to see if you continue this...hmm. I'd like to see Snape actually reading all the entries in the journal, and then talking to Harry about each one. The journal entries were so sad! And then, maybe Harry getting used to summer life with Snape and Kenai, and with occasional (constant) visits from Draco? (and Ron and Hermione)
*giggles insanely*
Loved it! I would love more too! If not novel length, how about some one-shots? Sev's reaction to the journal? K and H antics (give sev some gray hair?) More Draco interactions. Ginny and Harry? Maybe the elves? So many choices you have left us with!
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
V.
I love this story onward to the final chapter
I love this story onward to the final chapter
I love this story onward to the final chapter
Great chapter. I really thought that Harry had killed Snape. Heart was in my throat there.
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