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Title: Fighting 30 Dec 2016 4:31 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Severus is making some progress with Harry. He is certainly being patient. Still, after all the years being head of house, he has plenty of experience. I'm glad Harry is able to defend himself. I wonder if there are any other magical things that could help him with his disabilities? With his reluctance to talk to Madam Pomfrey, it will be hard to find out.
Title: Fighting 12 Jun 2012 10:36 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I didnt expect Harry to break down so soon.
    Nice story, brutal but interesting
Title: Fighting 16 Feb 2012 4:58 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Well written
Title: Fighting 02 Jun 2011 4:06 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. Harry in this fic is pretty cool. I was worried about him being disabled, but I find relief in the fact that he can handle himself.
    One thing that annoys me though is his use of the word "ain't" in this chapter. I quite understand why he would use the word, as he seems to have been living on the street at a time, but in the other chapters, he seems quite intelligent and well aware...it's weird having him result to poor word usage. I'm going to assume that his use of the word is simply because his brave facade was slipping and his guard was down the more upset he got.

    I have enjoyed this fic thus far, but I really thought I wouldn't. I just hate reading fics about Harry being physically impaired. Makes me all sad inside...

    Author's Response:

    I'm going to assume that his use of the word is simply because his brave facade was slipping and his guard was down the more upset he got.

    - That's the reason I was going with.  :)

Title: Fighting 20 Apr 2011 12:48 pm
Reviewer: Heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Shoot poor Harry a flashback?
Title: Fighting 19 Apr 2011 11:44 pm
Reviewer: Rye (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really well written, and even though you don't write it in first person, it gives the reader a concrete idea of what Harry thinks, and how he works. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Title: Fighting 19 Apr 2011 8:14 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, now...there you go again. I'm all upset for poor Harry--even though he's NOT weak or a freak.

    Good chapter.
Title: Fighting 19 Apr 2011 2:07 am
Reviewer: wandlorean (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very lovely and painful way to end this chapter. Painful because I'm on edge now, anxiously waiting to find out how Snape reacts to Harry's facade crumbling.

    May I say, I absolutely love your Harry? He's much more clever, jaded, and cynical than canon Harry (completely understandable,look at what he's suffered through in your fic). There's a vulnerability inside him, somewhere deep down, but he remains quite hardened on the outside. I really enjoy your portrayal of him and am very much looking forward to the next chapter.

    By the way, the part where Snape reaches out and touches Harry's hand, the very hand that is missing several fingers, just cut me to the bone. Such a small thing, yet so meaningful and poignant. Amazing storytelling here.

    Author's Response:

    Geez, now you're making me sniffle. 

    Thanks.  :)  More to come in the near future.  Snape will be learning more of why Harry is having such a violent reaction NOW . . .

Title: Fighting 18 Apr 2011 11:45 pm
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was so sad but well written as always :P I feel so bad for Harry and I hope that Snape can get through to him.
    It really was pretty cool how he messed up Aubrey though haha.
    Really great job! I can't wait to read more of this!
Title: Fighting 18 Apr 2011 6:13 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder what will happen now that Snape has finally broken through that hard exterior of Harry's. Perhaps he can begin to build some trust between them?

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