A lawyer. Wow, Severus is playing hardball. I would have thought that Albus was be more upset about the incident.
Ha, Minerva really pissed him off
Title: Reparations
| 17 Jan 2012 12:46 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter only trouble is Dumbledore is not being called to account on his crimes! Love Moody and Severus trying to get on! Thank you
Argh, I just want to slap McGonagall one or two, Dumbledore's not far behind. Hooray for Snape and Moody!
Argh, I just want to slap McGonagall one or two, Dumbledore's not far behind. Hooray for Snape and Moody!
Another excellent chapter! It was so nice to find it on the recently updated list today. :)
I like how Severus has got the legal-eagle on the case now, and if I'm interpreting the little hint right, are the papers that Severus is referring to, perhaps, adoption or guardianship papers?
I've very much disliked Minerva's attitude towards and her biased actions toward Harry and the other Slytherins. She deserves what is likely coming to her!
BTW, in the following sentence, I think you wanted the word "propitious" instead of "precipitous".
"Well, then it is rather precipitous that you are going to begin learning how to occlude," Severus said at last, giving Harry the slightest of encouraging smiles.
I truly look forward to the new chapter. Well done!
Wonderful chapter, I am glad you continued with this. I don't know if I've Reviewed before, or if I've mentioned it before, but you do know that this qualifies for my Challenge? Indeed, over-qualified, and I think you've done better than I did answering my own challenge, even if you didn't enter it. Kudos, and keep on writing.
This is an awesome story! A bit disgusting and warped in parts, but overall a great story! I like that Moody is part of Harry's little "family" in the story.
This is an awesome story! A bit disgusting and warped in parts, but overall a great story! I like that Moody is part of Harry's little "family" in the story.
I'm glad you fnally updated this..you have alot of good stories
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