Good for Millicent. I'm glad that she has joined the ranks of Harry's friends. It sounds like she could use some new friends, too. I like the way Flitwick is being portrayed here. He always seemed like he would be a good teacher and a smart guy. He isn't used often enough in fanfic stories and it's nice to see him.
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| 09 Apr 2013 12:14 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very powerful chapter well handled, thank you
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHERE IS IT? WHERE IS THE REST? I NEED IT! I NEED IT!!!!
usually read on fanfiction but fan fic been being a pain sending me updates so can't wait to read more
Well we know that Harry has some big bang powers and he needs to learn to control his emotions a little better when he gets upset.
Are you going to have them tell Remus about whats wrong with him?
Are you going to get Minerva to lighten up or is she going to retire or get fired. The way she is acting I wouldn't mind it.
| Title: A Slight Upset
| 31 Oct 2012 6:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved this chapter. I like how the professors are lining up. I would love to have more flashbacks of how Harry and Moody met and how Harry reacted to the news of going to Hogwarts and being a wizard
| Title: A Slight Upset
| 30 Oct 2012 6:42 pm
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| Reviewer: djaddict (Anonymous)
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I was a bit tentative about reading this because a permanently disabled Harry disturbs me too much, but I am glad I stuck with it. This is really good.
Oh, and thank you for having Moody adopt Severus, the other possible relationship was as disturbing to me as it was to Severus. lol
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