What a compelling and terrifying story! Very creative and well written. I like how you make disabled Harry resourceful, tough, and Slytherin. And really like Moody’s role and characterization in this story.
Love Moody’s paternal presence! Really enjoying your story thus far!
Ah, f hell, you could not let it be just the cute happy ending, could you? There better be sequel, then!
Thanks for amazing and hard story. The idea with a dragon because of Dumby was spectacular. And I am as reader grateful for the healings which Harry had, even if I am grumpy about the final ending :)
As always from you, awesome work. Thoroughly enjoyed this, having read and enjoyed the beginning many years ago. Loved the Moody/Snape interaction as well as the Snape/Harry. I always enjoy seeing different versions of the Golden trio/quartet and I particularly like the Teddy/Neville/Hermione group here and would like to see how Millicent meshes - she tends to be an underused character with regards to Harry.
I can only hope that at some point you'll be ready to come back to this particular universe and give us a sequel. Very intrigued to see how 2nd year might pan out without Dumbles in charge or, for that matter who might be running Hogwarts. Either Flitwick or McGonagall might make for interesting dynamics and of course since Lucius seems to be the same as usual, I can see the whole diary thing still happening. Oooh - dragon-Harry talking to Basilisk. Mmmm. Yeah, so much potential. Maybe, someday. ;)
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| 26 Aug 2017 7:21 pm
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Thank you for a brilliant story can't wait for the one shots
| Title: Introspection
| 26 Aug 2017 7:18 pm
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A lovely chapter thank you so much
I was unsure of this when I started but I am so glad I kept reading, in every story I have read Snape & Moody have always hated each other, it never would have seemed possible that they would get on but you made it so believable & funny, I just loved it. Thank you.
p.s. would you please consider talking your muse into finishing unbuttoned as it is one of my all time favorite stories & I would dearly love to see how it progresses & ends. Thank you again
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