You’ve brilliantly captured Harry’s state of mind.
I really enjoyed reading the journal and gaining added context. It’s beautiful to imagine Harry reading it with Snape’s empathic notes when he’s older.
It was nice being able to read Harry's journal, and 'see' his artwork throughout it as well as Snape's responses to him. Lovely work.
| Title: The Journal
| 05 Apr 2016 9:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Haven't read the first story but loved this thank you
Made me frackin cry! Just lovin this.
Author's Response: Awww, you poor thing! Have a tissue...
Very touching and gave us a really good insight to Harry's mind
great companion piece!!!!
oh my...TOT
he was so depressed.
i am glad he got his second chance...after all, everyone deserves one.
| Title: The Journal
| 06 Apr 2011 12:24 am
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| Reviewer: Shh (Anonymous)
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nice follow up to the first story! I've been pondering this story line - I like the writing a lot, but I can't help but feel that Harry took a coward's way out by de-aging himself... I would have rather him have been hit by a de-aging spell; but I guess that story line has already been done. I just don't like to think of him giving up his friends voluntarily.
Author's Response: Oh yes, it was cowardly. The nature of severe depression, though, makes one very selfish. Rarely does one think of those that will be left behind.
| Title: The Journal
| 05 Apr 2011 12:25 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well written between the two view points thank you
Author's Response: You're very welocme! :)
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