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Reviews For Cradle and All
Do update this gem.Our Snape is languishing, baby is wailing and we readers Beg you authors to write fewer stories,but to please FINISH them before waltzing on to the next unfinished torso. This is such a lovely story and has a lot of promise, and it is left? Maybe one more chapter, in which Snape is saved, and he,baby and Harry sit together in a sofa, joking and drinking tea,... or something.... please. it is good. Favourited. 'Three' for my weekly frustration over 'works in progress'.
KCK-Lumcer
Who's in charge now - can't be Kingsley, he wouldn't do 'that'. NO, make it someone who's gone crazy, and please have it only a rumour that proves false that anyone has been killed yet. It just doesn't ring true. You've done so well with this fic so far, don't go too extreme and kill it. *begs* Regardless of my qualms, please know that I think this is written well, even though I can't identify with the direction your plot might be taking. misundersnape... Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Don't worry, I don't intend to make it so horrific that I write myself into a corner I can't get out of. As far as it being rumors, though...sorry, can't say that it's rumors. Government entities throughout history have actually gone this far, though perhaps not with the general focus on babies. As one reviewer pointed out, there is a historical correlation with this situation vis a vis the edict of King Herod's mandate to kill all baby boys below a certain age, in an attempt to kill the one who would grow up to overthrow him. (Hmm...sounds suspicously like Voldemort going after Harry as a baby, doesn't it?). There are other instances in history that are confirmed in the Bible's accounting, too, such as the plague that took only the first born sons of the Egyptians, etc. But, despite my referring to two specific places in the Bible, please don't confuse this with some sort of religious angle. It's just the most widely-read source I could think of off the top of my head. Most of the history books I've used in my research very few people outside of academic circles have ever heard of, and they're not really something you can just check out from the public library. As far as it not ringing true...why not? When Fudge was in office, he did a great number of vastly idiotic things, like stationing Dementors outside of a boarding school. When Voldemort was in control of the Ministry, there were trials of muggleborns and half-bloods where they were accused of stealing the magic they were born with. How is it any less believable that the so-called Light side might go to extremes in an attempt to purge the Darkness from their population? There are instances in history where people were executed by the hundreds just for the mere accusation of practicing witchcraft, with absolutely no proof other than what the one who accused them said they did (flying on a broom at midnight, really?) Not to mention when the Black Death was going on, plenty of people who were still in the first stages of the disease, not even close to death yet, were heaped onto the corpse wagons to be thrown into mass graves or funeral pyres along with those who had already succumbed. Monty Python was being a bit tongue-in-cheek with their sketch, but there really were plenty of people whose protestations of "I'm not dead!" went ignored because they showed signs of having the Plague. I think it's perfectly logical that after years of terror under the threat of Voldemort and his Death Eaters, that usually-reasonable people might react in a type of mass-hysteria and overcorrect in an attempt to prevent something similar from happening in the future. Besides which, there's an old adage that plainly states, "Never underestimate the stupidity of people in large groups". So...while I don't agree with your opinion that the situation is unrealistic, I do promise that it's not going to derail the story. It's a plot twist with a reason, and trust me, it will all make sense in the end.
"Bundle of joy... yeah that's it" Oh yes, you sound like you've done this before. I have five, so I know you have at least got a good grip on the first few weeks after bringing a new baby home. I always say: If they weren't cute, you'd EAT them! *looks at my 13 y/old... same, same... the sentiment still holds... :p "Yes, Mum" ...Say, Hermione, what do you know about babies?" Ah, brilliant, Harry is finally using his 'Slytherin' traits... Poor Hermione, never knows when to keep her big trap shut! Serves her right. Aw, but on the other hand, I can't wait to see her cuddling Severus' new born baby. I can't abide a HG/SS fic normally, but this sort of affiliation I like... Great job! Oh, and I like the Snape parts last chapter too. He's determinedly staying harsh to spare himself, I imagine. It'll be a harder fall when he does though, I suppose. Bless him. Thanks... misundersnape...
Odd that Harry didn't just come up with anything 'temporary', but put such thought into it. After all, Severus could change it to whatever he wanted afterwards. Still, I love the names, and hope that Severus appreciates them too and keeps them - they're beautiful! Poor girl, I hope Severus finds her and helps her out ultimately too. She must be hurting tremendously. Great job so far! misundersnape... |
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