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Title: A New Beginning 20 Dec 2018 7:30 pm
Reviewer: MagnificentAndStrange (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this fic! I don't often read time travel/period piece works but this was very well done!
Title: A New Beginning 12 Sep 2016 6:41 pm
Reviewer: etherian (Signed) [Report This]
    This is wonderful! I do wish Harry ended up with Severus but I see the way your Severus was in this story and so where Harry ended up worked well.

    You really are a terrific writer and I am so pleased that you are sharing your talent, with us, your hungry readers.

    Author's Response: Thanks again for your feedback etherian. I definitely understand your longing for Harry to live with Snape, haha. It seems all my other stories go that way, so I felt I needed to do something different in this case. It's nice to hear you understand the choice - although yes, I quite agree that one cannot help but long for Snape to just keep Harry! Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts, and kindness. It's a pleasure to know that my stories bring joy to others - and to know I've also given you some happiness by posting my work is the cherry on top of the fun that is writing! All the best, Whitetail.
Title: Drawing the Blueprints 12 Sep 2016 5:29 pm
Reviewer: etherian (Signed) [Report This]
    Usually I review at the end but I just wanted to mention that I am rather on pins and needles here.

    Author's Response: Hi etherian! Thanks so much for leaving a review! I do still read new ones despite not actively adding stories to the site these days. It always makes my day to hear from new readers! - Cheers, Whitetail.
Title: A New Beginning 03 May 2016 9:27 pm
Reviewer: Applefritter (Signed) [Report This]
    This was such an amazing story. It invoked horror, dread, suspense, hope and wonder, I am so glad I got to read this, thank you for writing :-)!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much Applefritter! I don't check for reviews often anymore, so it makes me smile so very much to see some when I do! It's usually when I need to cheer up, so thanks for the kind words. Cheers! - Whitetail
Title: A New Beginning 02 Nov 2014 1:56 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Honestly, I wasn't sure what to expect with this one, but I was by no means disappointed! It was an interesting premise which I feel you executed well. So glad Harry gets to live with the Weasleys. It's a good thing Molly's used to have mischievous boys, though, because I rather suspect things are about to get even livelier at the Burrow, now!

    Author's Response: Yes, it was a very different story from my usual work! I wrote this one to try my hand at action type stories. Thats' my main use of fanfiction - to learn new techniques. I am glad you were not disappointed, however, and found 1612 interesting despite its oddness! Ah yes, the Burrow will get quite crazy! Thanks so much for reading this one - and for the record, I had more fun writing the sequel, oddly enough. ;) Cough ... cough ... hint? Haha, thanks for giving 1612 a chance, and reviewing, Dream.
Title: Reflections and Resolutions 14 May 2012 8:07 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, this explains why Snape did not apparate. It was killing me that he did not. I'm glad Evelyn managed to keep her wall of fire going.

    Author's Response: Yes, I am glad you got that figured out. I'm just sorry your answer took so long! I hadn't had much reason to be on my account as I did not have any stories going until the prompt fest. Thank you a lot for the feedback!
Title: A Black Cloud 14 May 2012 4:46 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    This has been good so far, but how come Snape cannot just do a side-along apparition with Harry? He could apparate them out of the jail cell to the cabinet, grab the wands, and quickly apparate them back to the faerie ring or back under the cave.
    I assume the reason the other wizards can't escape is a mixture of wards,and maybe apparation wasn't studied back then, but surely Snape and Harry could apparate, or more so Snape, since Harry is underaged and probably couldn't do it anyway.
    Also, Snape should have been able to summon the wands when they were on their way to the jail. The wands were pretty close, and we see from HPatOotP that the wand still works even if you're not touching it, because Harry totally lumos'ed in that alley with the dementors even though he wasn't touching his wand.

    Author's Response:

    I see that you figured out the answer to the apparation question, from what you said in your next review. It would have drove me practically crazy too, so that's why I made sure to have a reason. As for the wand thing ... I always figured that you could not summon your wand to you. My reasoning for this is that a wand is a channel through which a wizard uses their magic, and so therefore, the wizard's magic goes through the wand and pulls an object toward the thing that the magic is emanating from - which in this case, is the wand. Therefore the wand would not work very well for summoning itself, as the magic can flow from the wand, and pull objects to the wand, but not pull itself to the wizard. I don't think it would work all that well, and only an exceptionally powerful wizard could focus their power enough to bring their wand to them. And, while Snape is powerful, I believe his talents lie mainly in the field of potions. That, and even Dumbledore seldom does wandless magic, and even so, wandless magic shows up far more in the HP movies than the books - and I nearly always go by the books. Anyway, that is my reasoning. And, yes, I know there is an occasion in Philosopher's Stone where Snape does the countercurse to stop Quirrell from jinxing Harry's broom. Lots say this is absolute proof that Snape can in fact do wandless magic. But ... I think that there is no proof that he wasn't holding his wand covertly, somewhere out of sight while muttering the countercurse, or something like that. Anyway, Thank you so much for questions! I do hope I  sufficiently explained the methods to my madness. Cheers! 

     

Title: Shadows that Lie Ahead 07 Apr 2012 6:28 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahahahaha! "But it's so fluffy!" Good thing Harry wasn't around when Evelyn caught the birds for the thestrals.

    Author's Response: Glad you got a kick out of it! Thanks a lot for the review, and I quite agree when it comes to the birds! Harry probably wouldn't have liked that much ...
Title: A New Beginning 26 Aug 2011 4:37 pm
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for your story as well :) It was nice to read it, really, really nice. Good luck in your future projects!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much Victoire, glad you enjoyed it!
Title: A New Beginning 26 Aug 2011 3:57 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic story. One of my all-time favourites. Congratulations on finishing it too.

    Hmm...a sequel would be lovely, but if not, I really would love to read another of your stories. You are very talented! ;)

    Author's Response: Thanks so much Pandora for this one and all of your reviews. I have very much enjoyed hearing from you. I don't think I'll ever do a sequel to this.

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