Oh, if only that could have happened in canon. The Dursleys never really did get their comeuppance.
| Title: A Late Night Visit
| 26 Apr 2011 6:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter I love their conversation and hope we will witness the one with the Dursleys thenk you
| Title: Flapping a Butterfly's Wing
| 26 Apr 2011 6:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely start great Severus IC and grumpy
I love your writing style!
| Title: A Late Night Visit
| 24 Apr 2011 8:35 am
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| Reviewer: Min (Anonymous)
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More please! :)
I really liked the differences between the canon scene and this one. Severus is actually understanding of Harry's reality once he realizes that Harry hasn't had any exposure to magic, and yet is still very much in character with the book Snape in HPPS.
Best of all, while the basic events of this scene are practically the same as the original source novel, it reads like a new story, and I'm very much looking forward to the changes that Severus collecting Harry will make as they move forward.
Well done!
Loved it. Please update soon.
| Title: A Late Night Visit
| 22 Apr 2011 11:37 am
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| Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Awesome start! I really like stories where Severus is the one to go and introduce Harry to the wizarding world. Can't wait for more!
Awsome so far, please continue.... scratch that. You BETTER continued or I'll hunt you done.
| Title: A Late Night Visit
| 22 Apr 2011 6:05 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Very sweet! I love how you have portrayed both Harry and Snape. I will look forward to the updates!
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